i continue

artwork by francis picabia

i continue
droplets of light fall on me
like rain sneaking through clouds
on a summer’s day
summer breeze flutters
like butterfly wings alighting 
on a fragrant flower
i sigh
like an inaudible symphony
heard by only the chosen few
i accelerate
like a jazzy rhythm
realizing forward is the only way to go

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

We must continue if we are to survive, and you describe the most charming way to move on to a jazzy rhythm as part of doing so...continue, sigh and then accelerate with realization it is the wisest way to survive the chaos of staying stuck in the moment! The expression on the face of the lovely lady seems to express just that - contemplating the better choice!

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate not only the review, but the fact you noticed the artwork. I try to find something that portrays my thoughts in the poem. Thanks so much, Sheila. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, as the universe unfolds, butterflies
welcome the new born babies as flowers bloom
and music soothes our soul. We are here to
love and share encouragement. Beautiful poetry
and art. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

You are a sweetheart, Pat. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

There is an understanding, a resignation, but underlying it all, a desire to continue, despite life's challenges, it's all we have -- forward.

[Lydia Shutter]

Exactly...we must continue to continue. Thank you so much, KL. Lydi**

[Papaya]

Such a delicate and beautiful little creature, the butterfly.
It flies against some strong winds at times and gets blown off course but it if you look at the Monarch in particular, what a journey! It has its own strength, resilience and grace. Lovely poem again!

[Lydia Shutter]

Butterflies are very important to me...always have been. They live but six weeks, but they bring beauty into our world. Thank you for the review. Lydi**

[Papaya]

You're welcome. :)
I love them too. When I was 19 or so I got a butterfly tattoo.
It was sort of a spontaneous thing. It's the only one I have, my one act of rebellion that I kept hidden from my parents. (Still...)

[Cassie]

We keep pressing on and must face everything head on, somethings happen in life and i wish we could fast forward those moments and pause to some very good moments but as they say, life has seasons, a season for everything. I have missed reading you

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Cassie. I was away for a while. Lydi***

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I really liked this poem. I loved the way you structured the lines in italics to progress to the right. Very creative and refreshing!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[redzone]

I like that "jazzy rhythm" of life Lydi and you sing, play and write it with wonderment and wide eyed enthusiasm... what a scrumptious meal found in these words: "droplets of light fall on me
like rain sneaking through clouds
on a summer’s day"... yes, to continue in this is the only way to go... sometimes we look back, but even then we continue forward... funny thing about time's arrow and the heart's feelings...

I am glad you "continue" Lydi and continue to write these "nice" poems...

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

Onward and upward...it's the only way to go. Your "nice" reviews are always welcomed, Curt. Thank you. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

there is a sweet sadness that makes me want to linger there ..but your poem is wise ..one must keep moving or risk the death of hearts ... the picture is perfect for your poem and vice versa .. i like the "jazzy rhythm"!
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

People who know me always see a smile on my face and they assume all is well in my world....which is what I want them to believe. Sometimes a smile can fool even me! :) Thanks for the great review, E. Lydi**

[samarahmed]

this was dreamy and creative i enjoyed it!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the jazzy rhythm of taking life in stride, moving forward with hope and love...dancing to the tune of summer and positive energy...

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

We must try anyway! Thanks, Jacob. Lydi**