I really love your imagination here . . . catching sparks & putting them on a lathe, then suddenly a world of syllables, like a key to unlock the pleasures of life! This is so surprising & an interesting way to express how the sparks turn into written works! Also, showing the connection between sensual sparks in the beginning and the final 3 lines, which are so affectionate & welcoming!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Barley, I always appreciate your reviews. Thank you. Lydi**
Lyd, so many times when i read you, i have no actual words to review because sometimes i feel like i may wash down the message. I really really like this
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I appreciate the fact you continue to read me, Cassie. Thank you so much. Lydi*
place that feels like truth and reads like a kiss
a place i now invite you to visit with me
Love these above lines ... it have a very soft and beautiful touch ..... great job
An exceptional poem Lydi. How creative it is, using the widely used metaphor of sparks as a physical occurrence that expresses love. Your vocabulary is exemplary, expressing how love can draw the best out of us - which is also written extremely well, saying that the words spoke between lovers are made of syllables created by those sparks. A wonderful imaginative piece. Thank you for writing this piece as its showed me an 'idea' that I never thought of before.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Always happy to offer up something new. Thanks so much for the review, RMC. Lydi**
I really love your imagination here . . . catching sparks & putting them on a lathe, then suddenly a world of syllables, like a key to unlock the pleasures of life! This is so surprising & an interesting way to express how the sparks turn into written works! Also, showing the connection between sensual sparks in the beginning and the final 3 lines, which are so affectionate & welcoming!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Barley, I always appreciate your reviews. Thank you. Lydi**
You create a warm world, so beautiful and inviting, deeply moving for a wondrous Friday night. Everything comes to life when it burns with sweet sensuality.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Craig. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
Wow. This is what Friday night should always bring ... sultry, smart, beautiful ... all wrapped up with a perfectly selected image. Sparks Indeedily ! ~Jim