ever-changing palette

‘tis an opulent portrayal

of sensual fantasies you offer

lavishly accurate to the dreamy detail

 

self control sashays wantonly

in this resplendent world

and i,  but a chameleon,

delight in altering my hues

to suit the ever-changing palette

 of you

 

Reviews

[R.M.C]

Simply delightful and wonderfully composed. The use of 'colour' as an expression of one's personality is not only very insightful but also imaginative - it is easier for people to imagine colours than the complexity of personality and this metaphor really helps to bridge this gap. Furthermore, you've extended the use of 'colour' even further, using the metaphor of a Chameleon to express changing yourself to suit others. Simply sublime.

[Lydia Shutter]

R.M.C., I really appreciate your review. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this may be my favorite from you, the alliteration...the chameleon changing hues..adapting to the lover...and being the English teacher, you have to love the "dreamy detail."

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....you told me the favorite was last week...hey, I have to surpass myself to get a review like this! Thank you so much, Jacob. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

An ever changing palette makes for a wonderful romance.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, KL....have to keep it fresh and new. Lydi**

[Rob L]

lovely - it just rolls off the tongue and through the imagination ...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Rob. Lydi**