Hi lydia, l have introduced my
Nephew to writers cafe, he is
Just gone seventeen and has
Written a couple of poems, if
You have the time sometime would
you mind sending him a review, l
Think he is good for his years and l
Would like to encourage him, he uses
his name cathalwatkins, cheers, paddy.
Lydia...
The longing..in this poetic work of art..is
Palpable...remarkable analogies..the last two lines..
Incredible..
Climbing Jacob's ladder, catching stars..
Beauty envisioned by writing...
The imagery that portrays..the lifelong story
Of loving someone not right for you..
A story that has been written about through the centuries..
Echos here...
Worthy of Shakespeare..
Bravo...well done
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
I am humbled by your wonderful review. Thank you so much. Lydi**
I really enjoyed reading this piece. It has the right flow and it is well-balanced emotionally.
We all get these moments in our lives, when ' those reasons all disappear ' and the feelings take over control ( which is not a bad thing ) and you managed to capture it in writing. so nice!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Emotions are very important in life. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. Lydi**
Have I read this before? it sounds familiar.
it is so tender and reminiscent of a love that got away,
but still haunts your dreams.
always love your writing.
Trace
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
I posted it a month ago, Trace. It is possible you read it and did not review, not sure. Thanks fo.. read moreI posted it a month ago, Trace. It is possible you read it and did not review, not sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing now. Hope all is well with you. Lydi**
Love, my dear Lydia, is not like anything modern. In fact, it is rather old fashioned since the garments
and curves of it hardly goes out of style. We poets, (thank the good Lord) keep it alive like
that goldfish we change the water for each week, even when the stew of poo and flake has
settled on the glass tanks bottom. What I mean is that, even the hackneyed convictions of
conch shells and old memories aside, love is a new thing each time it's mentioned.
When you touch it, this love of life and duty, is as magical as it is ancient.
Magnificent write my friend.......dana
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Even your reviews are poetic and have metaphors and similes sprinkled in the lines, Dana. Thank you.. read moreEven your reviews are poetic and have metaphors and similes sprinkled in the lines, Dana. Thank you so much. Lydi**
If only I could hear your voice one more time...
against the waves of loneliness and lost desire...
Your poem is sad and romantic like a play that
ends too soon. truly, Pat
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
You totally understand my words, Pat. Thank you so much. lydi**