simply human

so many things come to mind in a coffee shop....people watching is one of my favorite pastimes.

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today

the circumference 

of the coffee shop 

is equal to “pie” squared 

and the equation of life seems unsolvable

i watch her

a caricature of herself

bright orange lipstick on the perimeter

of a clownish smile

gravity has not been kind and her self-esteem

is directly proportional 

to the remainder of latte in her paper cup

over there sits

mister incongruent

raggedy jeans and tee

with a diamond watch on his veined wrist

his overload of eccentricity would baffle even euclid

the cappuccino machine

is perpendicular to a window lacking symmetry

and certainly unfamiliar with the washer method

i show simple interest to a passerby

with a friendly smile

momentarily forgetting reciprocal rule is not in effect

there is but one constant here

we are simply 

           or not so simply

                            human

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

We are quite an interesting species to watch, aren't we? I used to do the same when I worked at a mall, I would take my lunch break and simply walk and observe the merchants and the shoppers. It got pretty hectic around the holidays, so I ventured to eat lunch in the office, instead.

I love this, just as much as coffee itself! A very astute observation and delivery...a must for my library!

Are there any "Dunkin Donuts" in Florida, Lydi? I was just commenting to FT about how good their coffee is!

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, Dunkin' Donuts is all over the place here. I do not like their coffee, sorry. Just too strong for me. I tend to get tea there or in Starbucks for that reason. Thanks for the great review! Lydi**

[aruntp Thalassery]

nice expressions. good and simple poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, aruntp. Lydi*

[B]

Seems like all the rules of engaging with another
have deluded many minds
Killing the essence of being simply human

This is a very wise write

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Nisreen. Lydi**

[Annie]

I like how you juxtapose human characters with inanimate object creating a fascinating imagery. It's modern, abstract, and beautiful at the same time. It feels like a postmodern poem without losing its human touch.

[Lydia Shutter]

Annie, I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[jesserose99]

whether true subjects or not you have a keen eye of observation of our 'pack'. I wonder what it must be like to live with your intuition. By this I mean, you seem to have the ability to teach others to look through the outer shell of a person, and into their inner light with your writing.

[Lydia Shutter]

I have always been a people watcher. I think that is where the inspiration for most of my poetry comes from. You are so kind with your reviews. Thanks, JesseRose. Lydi**

[David Scott]

I think the element of observation here is key. What separates humanity from the rest of nature? Our ability to observe and analyze. Then as we adapt as reconnect with "nature" we show the character of our gifts...
Interesting write. I like what you use your gifts for very much.

[Lydia Shutter]

Never considered my writing a gift, but the fact you do starts my day off with a smile. Thank you, David. Lydi**

[Trace]

This is so different from your usual sensual genius.
But I can see you sitting right there looking around
And jotting this down on a paper napkin.
Possibly while waiting for someone that was late.
An annoying trait in us humans.

Enjoyed ....Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Many years have passed and I don't write those Friday night writes as much anymore. Still, I do enjoy writing. thanks for the review, Trace. Happy Halloween. Lydi**

[Sanober]

I am so absorbed in the little details of your poem! people watching is one my favorite pastimes too. you come across all kinds of people, but its especially fun watching the weirdos! i can totally envision the woman you describe, almost like her whole life is playing out in front me. that's how powerful your descriptions are. this is simply an amazing piece of writing, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

I can spend a lot of time watching people...and writing stories to go with their appearances. Of course, my assumptions might be totally off, but they amuse me! :) Thanks so much, Sanober. Lydi**

[Kelsey Ann]

I like this a lot! (now I want coffee too hehe). You have such a way with words; I especially like the formatting of the last three lines :D

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Kelsey. Lydi*

[Miss Sharon]

Boy this rings so true to me Lydi. We are all just strangers in the night and shadows of our own selves. Brilliant writing as usual my friend. ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Sharon. I appreciate your review. Lydi**