wordless whispers

artwork by doris joa

there is a timelessness

in your wordless whispers

they touch me like a velvety summer breeze

     an autumn leaf dancing off a tree

          a rhythmic winter snowflake

               or the silver tears of a springtime rain

i listen for them as if in a trance

     even though you are long gone

they tug at my heart

they tickle that special part of me

time has made you the dream i dream

yes, your wordless whispers linger

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the opening two lines -- very thought-provoking (& I tend to be more cerebral) -- plus I always enjoy your smooth sensual descriptions of natural phenomena meant to conjure up sensations of longing. If only all absent beloved experiences could be this delightful! *smile*

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, if only. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[MOON]

Delicate write full of love.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review. Lydi*

[stars are far]

that was very beautiful, i actually havent read for a while and that was something i true loved ..thats deep and well expressed.. keep that coming :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. lydi**

[stars are far]

it is my pleasure .. :)

[Indra Neil]

enjoyed reading this enchanting brevity! excellent imagery! *claps*

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Indra. Lydi*

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[Patricia Wedel]

A gentle rustle by the river that
can barely be heard... delicate
sounds of memories... "or the silver
tears of a springtime rain"...
A symphony's prelude to a love note.
truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Pat, your reviews are always special and very much appreciated. Lydi**

[....................]

great title, such an apt picture and the most wonderful words that whisper to the heart of those of us who know that love exists, out there, somewhere... sometimes it is someone we have had opportunity to spend time with...sometimes it's that someone who has passed on from the world... but love, still remains... love this, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, love never dies. Thank you so much, FT.....especially for noticing the artwork. I try to find art that will complement my words. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

(time has made you the dream i dream...yes, your wordless whispers linger) Such a beautiful and delicate closure to this lovely write Lydi. I just love your style my dear....always have! ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, sweet Sharon. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The words "wordless whispers". I could write a complete poem from with ease. All words are needed to be said. Eyes of love and concern. Someone to sit with and enjoy life with. Thank you dear Lydia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

John, I always appreciate your reviews. Thank you. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lydia.

[Dara]

I love the lighthearted sound of this beautiful poem. Even though there is a strong sense of longing, the memory seems to linger 'ever gently on your mind', (to borrow a line from Glen Campbell's song.) Your words float upon the page like a song. I really love this, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

I remember that song! Thanks, Dara. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Kelsey Ann]

Love the line "rhythmic winter snowflake" - so beautiful. Makes me wish I had a special someone, so I could hear their wordless whispers. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Kelsey Ann. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[~]

A most powerful susurrating sound, that echoes the intricacy of that one special person. This poem travels through memories and plucks all the beautiful ones, creating a bouquet of longing.
Love the harmony of sounds throughout the poem. It gives the ear a velvety whispering sound.
loved it!!

[Lydia Shutter]

"Susurrating" love that word! :) Thank you very much, Moon. Lydi**