I love your opening analogies, very clever & well-stated . . . a departure from the sensual, now I'm seeing how well you also address the somewhat harsh everyday observations of life. Awesome wording: "loose tongue hung by its hinges" . . . & many more! Thanks for sharing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
While romance and sensuality are my favorite genres, I do write in other ones....often. Thank you f.. read moreWhile romance and sensuality are my favorite genres, I do write in other ones....often. Thank you for your review, Barley. Lydi**
I love your opening analogies, very clever & well-stated . . . a departure from the sensual, now I'm seeing how well you also address the somewhat harsh everyday observations of life. Awesome wording: "loose tongue hung by its hinges" . . . & many more! Thanks for sharing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
While romance and sensuality are my favorite genres, I do write in other ones....often. Thank you f.. read moreWhile romance and sensuality are my favorite genres, I do write in other ones....often. Thank you for your review, Barley. Lydi**
I like the artwork and the tale. Left me with the need to know more. You create dangerous and tempting place. Thank you dear Poet for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
And thank you, John, for your wonderful reviews. Lydi**
ouch.. this cuts deep. your words sharper than a samurai's sword take a stand to make their cuts properly, where they are needed.. a truth revealed with class, and passionate contempt..
loved it!!
There are those who masquerade as friends and take advantage of a compassionate person. Unfortunate.. read moreThere are those who masquerade as friends and take advantage of a compassionate person. Unfortunately, I have encountered all too many of them. Thank you, Moon. Lydi**
9 Years Ago
ugh.. that part of life, is not an easy one. yet, i am honored to have met such a soul as yours, tha.. read moreugh.. that part of life, is not an easy one. yet, i am honored to have met such a soul as yours, that will not give up giving her best to others!
Some individuals share selective truth in order to gain trust and undeserved sympathy of another. Not good situation but it's a reality that we must take cognizant. Very well written, lydi :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
You absolutely understand what I was saying, Gabrielle. Thank you so much. Lydi**
naked secrets are the worst kind, they may come out easily but unless its from a true friend, you are left alone.. ironic cause I always thought one of the things that made for real friends was the openness to share life stories and tell each other anything... guess that's just my idealism huh... appreciated how you wove this in with the images of warning sirens and flags and yet still cared enough to hear them out... which reflects not just in your poetry Lydi, but in who you are... a true friend/a true poet..
redzone
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
True friends, Curt, know that sharing life stories and telling each other anything is the way to go... read moreTrue friends, Curt, know that sharing life stories and telling each other anything is the way to go. True friends accept each other and never turn their backs on one another. In life, though, I have learned many disguise themselves as true friends. They use and abuse. Such is life. I know you are a true friend....and a true poet. Thank you for this very "nice" review. Lydi**
"while I listened to words you dared not share with others
was there a true story behind your words?
hindsight tells me no"
So true! Too many times seen in hindsight and then regret we didn't speak up or ignore those 'loose lips". Your wonderfully descriptive write is full of wisdom and awesome imagery. Love this one Lydia.
Whoa!!!!! All week I have been having thoughts like this, just didnt know how to put those thoughts together and make a poem like this. This is very good my friend, you took my thoughts and curved them so well. Now i can shelve. Right?
You mean I am renting space in your brain, my friend? LOL I am happy you were able to identify wit.. read moreYou mean I am renting space in your brain, my friend? LOL I am happy you were able to identify with my thoughts. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
9 Years Ago
Yes you are, you can stay there a little longer..lol