my mood

father's day is difficult for me every year

1956 Atlantic City

my mood
is like an empty chair
rocking on a porch
do you see it there - - near the seaside?
it's waiting to be filled

today i’ve decided to borrow your mirth
adopt the spring in your step
espouse your optimistic view of life
then stand back to admire
the view from the terrace

the humid breeze generously delivers
flower scented air to the veranda
while a tired smile plays on my lips
it’s all good - - because you were my daddy

Reviews

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This is a beautiful tribute to your dad, Lydi...I lost mine late last year and though I had opportunity to spend a lot of time with him, I do wish I could have had more and there are days I feel like that chair, empty and other times filled... at least we have memories :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, memories are precious. Thank you for the review and the compassion, FT. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

Lydi... to borrow your mirth...
to adopt the spring in your step...
How precious! I adore the photo
of you and your Dad. Seaside smiles
abide in your heart forever.
A perfect Fathers Day portrait
framed with affection. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Pat. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Love the feeling of this ... from the empty chair, to the adopting that positive view ... and, finishing us off with the last line ... loaded with an emotion all can identify with. As always, you are the best. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, my friend. Always a pleasure to receive your reviews. Be well. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

A great tribute on this Father's Day to your deceased but cherished dad who still inspires you to write such beautiful things...:),...................

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you dear Sami! Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:)....................

[Jamestown]

What a fantastic tribute piece to pops!
Wording is stellar and quite beautiful:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, James. Lydi*

[Kelly Scheppers]

How I envy you, having such indomitable memories of your Dad. No matter how old we become, we'll always be their "little girl"!

Bless you for writing such a tangible feeling from your heart! [ ...you really favor your Dad, Lydi! ]

[Lydia Shutter]

My whole life, people told me I looked just like my Mom, but as I age (perish the thought! LOL), I do look more like my Dad. I was very fortunate to have wonderful parents. They will never be forgotten as long as I am alive. Thanks for the warm review, Kelly. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and good words. Old places and memories are never forgotten dear Poet. Thank you for sharing and amazing poetry and memory.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, John. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lydia.

[Dara]

Your words just touched my heart Lydi. I can feel the amazing love you have combined with the huge sense of loss you experienced. My son and daughter just lost their father last October so Father's Day will be rough. I hope that you will find a way to get through without too much sadness. Your poem speaks volumes.

[Lydia Shutter]

It has been 21 years since my father passed, but each Father's day is difficult. I hope your children will be with each other to support one another. Thank you for your compassionate review, Dara. Lydi**

[Neville]

This is a truly beautiful series of recollections and a most fitting tribute to your father Lydi. I am sure there are many of us out here who share your sense of loss and longing on the run up to 'Fathers Day'...

My own Dad whom I loved & still love dearly checked out only three Fathers Days ago.... N

[Lydia Shutter]

We never forget them and the holiday brings all the memories to the forefront. Thank you, Neville. Lydi**

[Neville]

Too true & thank you, N

[~]

What a heartfelt gorgeous write for father's day. A man who has brought to life such a wonderful daughter. His happy memories live strong in you as you recall his snuggling arms.
XO

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Moon. You are very kind. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A well expressed sentiment although I never quite understand how we humans deal with loss. It is the most certain of all aspects of our lives and yet the one most are ill prepared for. The love, the photograph and the memories live on inside you Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

We all know our loved ones will not be with us forever, indeed....yet we are never prepared when it happens. Thank you, John. Lydi**