my forever poem

artwork by stanislav plutenko

you are my poem
walking through my dreamscape
fondling
       then fulfilling
my every fantasy
as it tiptoes through my consciousness
a shooting star kissing my night sky
with passion's wet tongue
making my anything become my everything
my rhyme without reason
my reason without rhyme
my forever poem

Reviews

[stars are far]

That was very beautiful work, I loved "my anything become my everything" that was very nice, because at some points the usual things which are anything because everything by the touch of a lover or a sweet memory. I loved this work :)
Stay Blessed My friend :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Matching Socks]

Words of love written upon your heart. So beautiful.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review, Ana. Thank you. Lydi**

[Matching Socks]

You're wlcome!

[Cassie]

wow wow wow....this is so so well written and so mind blowing, it makes me want to re read over and over again

[Lydia Shutter]

Cassie, you made my day sweeter. Thank you. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Soothing to the heart, such love is abundant here...Lydi, I am always blessed to read you when I can get time here, magnificent poem xo

[Lydia Shutter]

I am honored you find the time as often as you do, Poppy. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Jimmy Yetts]

Sublimely romantic and fervently devotional.
Sentiments born of profound love; whispered with joy.
An amazing offering, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Frankie. Lydi**

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

You have immortalized your beloved muse here. And with that you have immortalized the love and passion for one another.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Nadia. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

You are a very lucky lady. To have this subject matter to write about and the skill to do it justice.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Ken. Indeed, I know I am. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"making my anything become my everything"

who needs rhyme or reason to be together...it all has such a good beat to it...and that is "love"---

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, love is the rhythm of our lives...no doubt. Thanks, Jacob. Lydi**

[Moonie]

"Forever" is such a powerful, such a beautiful word, even though all forevers do not last for eternity.... My favourite lines would be : "my rhyme without reason
my reason without rhyme"

Love makes every trace of reason fade away, much like how the shimmering tails of shooting stars dissolve into nothingness with time.

[Lydia Shutter]

Absolutely! There is no logic in matters of the heart. Thank you for your review. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

What a beautiful and sensual expression of words Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, John. Lydi**

[MOON]

Beautifully seductive , poetry will do that to you!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Moon. Lydi**