my forever poem

artwork by stanislav plutenko

you are my poem
walking through my dreamscape
fondling
       then fulfilling
my every fantasy
as it tiptoes through my consciousness
a shooting star kissing my night sky
with passion's wet tongue
making my anything become my everything
my rhyme without reason
my reason without rhyme
my forever poem

Reviews

[stars are far]

That was very beautiful work, I loved "my anything become my everything" that was very nice, because at some points the usual things which are anything because everything by the touch of a lover or a sweet memory. I loved this work :)
Stay Blessed My friend :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

You are the poem, and love is the breath that gives you life. This ode to your love is simply beautiful. "A shooting star kissing my night sky." Sigh!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much! Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Yet another sensual, sexy, romantic kiss from you. How lucky your love is, to have this passion all these years.

[Lydia Shutter]

Almost forty....we are both lucky and we know it. Thank you, KL. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

It is rare indeed. Yes, lucky, for sure.

[andrew mitchell]

Such beauty you have displayed! Touching!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Andrew. Lydi**

[Anahat]

Woah! It was beautiful.. I loved it :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

You write the most beautiful love poems Lydi. I love the simplicity of your words, woven into something magical. I can't help but smile.
my rhyme without reason
my reason without rhyme
my forever poem
Stunning my friend!
:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Julie. At my age, I guess I should not be a romantic, but I always will be! Lydi**

[rubie]

there is no rhyme or reason as to why we fall in love with the people we do.

"making my anything become my everything"

what an exquisitely beautiful line. I know exactly what that means. anyone who has ever been so deeply in love knows.

your poetry truly captures what passion really means, because you write with it.

[Lydia Shutter]

I am touched by your review, Rubie. Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

This is extremely creative and well thought out and executed!
I like the wording and message really cool:)
Picture just adds to an already fantastic piece!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, James. Lydi**

[Adam Adams]

Beautiful photographic-art you've emerged with the proper disk of words.
"my rhyme without reason.. my reason without rhyme..." Very sensual lines. Full of romance and pleasure. I like the depth of your poetry. The line: "My forever poem" is seemed a wee bit similar to, like, "My forever love". Interesting. Well written.

[Lydia Shutter]

The words "love" and "poem" are interchangeable in my world. Thanks for your review, Adams. Lydi

[Kelly Scheppers]

So, so, lovely...

"my rhyme without reason
my reason without rhyme" ...it just resonates...like moonlight!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Kelly. Lydi**