Yes, Lydia's absolutely right. Sunday afternoons always bring something better than Monday dunes - a little less foggy than Saturday evenings - a little more dynamic than Friday nights. You ain't write a poetry, but built a castle words... where remembrance of past & the aromas of wet sands both're saved behind the imagery. Nice flow of ink. Well written!
...most definetly! Nothing sweetens my coffee better than inspiration...and a little bit of Entenmann's Danish! ; )
Can it really be April, tomorrow? I hope your days are full of poetry, Lydi!
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Mmmmmm Entemann's! Yea, but inspiration has no calories! LOL Thanks so much, Kelly. I always app.. read moreMmmmmm Entemann's! Yea, but inspiration has no calories! LOL Thanks so much, Kelly. I always appreciate the time you take to read me. Lydi**
Hmnnn...writing time is also fantasy time for me. We hold the pen, why not write beautiful stories about us? lol
I can relate to this, Lydi. But my writing time will not be as limited as before because 2 days more and end of classes, our summer vacation already.
Great piece!
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9 Years Ago
Enjoy your vacation Dh! Thank you for the review. Lydi**
I love how you spend a Sunday afternoon Lydia. Its divine. Just like this beauty of a write that you have fashioned here.
"The queen of the two story sand castle" made me smile.
Lovely writing my dear friend.
:))
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9 Years Ago
Keep Smiling, Anto! Thanks for reading and the review. Lydi**
yes, i do believe that is what Sunday afternoons are for, dreaming of those sandcastles...we can worry about reality when the tides go out, and Monday morning comes.
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Just like Scarlett O'Hara worried it about it tomorrow! :) Thanks, Jacob. Lydi**
indeed they are for a "true" poet :)
I'm amazed at your ability to summon a picture in the reader's mind with a few strokes of the brush.
hey there's even coffee in this one!
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But of course....because what is life without coffee? :) Thanks, Woody. lydi**
Very beautiful work here. Its also funny that I'm reading this on a sunday. Except that I'm at work. But I really enjoyed reading this. Lovely comparisons. Great job.
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Thank you, Kristan. Sorry you have to work on Sunday. Lydi**