Immortalize me

it's Friday night!

artwork by Emmanuel

My fantasies plead to be etched
into your libido forevermore

just as Plato begged
to be immortalized by Socrates

Quench your thirst here and now my darling
yes…at the deep well of my desire
tell me in a throaty whisper
this is the tastiest libation you’ve ever sampled
while furious touches and spicy tastes

perform a stately saraband on the muscles of your chest
my silhouette will shimmer

in the flickering candlelight

 

Come...allow your anxious lips

to magically melt into my ivory skin
watch as our shadows become one
pleasure exquisitely simmering
                                then boiling over
believe it…the only truth is our passion

Indeed, the winds of reality
will dare to blow once more
but they have no place here
immortalize me
on this…our wondrous night

 

 

Reviews

[Neville]

Exquisitely and mouth-wateringly well writ. Tastefully erotic, & perfect for any night of the week

'My fantasies plead to be etched
into your libido forevermore' --- That's most definitely gonna be my next chat up line if ever I get the
chance. Good on yer Lydi x

[Lydia Shutter]

Hey, if it works, I deserve a commission! LOL Thanks so much, Neville. Lydi**

[Adam Adams]

Very sensual write. Title speaks well to its page... enjoyed it. "Friday" is a very beautiful day of the week that makes dreams come true.. especially on nights. Interesting.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Erotic and passionate with a pinch of the adventurous but also full of love.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, John. Lydi**

[Jimmy Yetts]

Love sublime!--can be savored; often, I have found, when unplanned and least expected.
Few have portrayed it better, Lydi.
An enchanting offering!

[Lydia Shutter]

Frankie, your review is a great way to start my day. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Oh my. Quite the lustful write that certainly gets its message across. I knew I was not old enough to read it ... but could not resist. Nicely done.~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....Jim, you grew up on my poetry! :) thanks so much for stopping by. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there are some nights that are just like that...so perfect in chemistry that we want to be immortalized in the lab of memory.

nicely done.
jacob

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Jacob. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and artwork dear Lydia. Something our eyes had seen. Become a permanent part of us forever. Place and people can be immortalized. Thank you fro sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, John. Your words mean a lot to me. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

It was my pleasure to be able to read your words.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Oh, if only every night could be a friday night!

The women in these sultry vignettes portray the aggressor, and I like that! It speaks in the tongue of Cleopatra for me, by no other than Elizabeth Taylor!

Such a delight, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Gotta watch out for those asps though! :) Thanks, Kelly. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

' .. to magically melt into my ivory skin - watch as our shadows become one .. '


You know, Lydi, you could save the global population's heating bills with poetry like this! And yet, this poem is immensely elegant and somehow wisely phrased - maybe sincerity plays the strongest part. Don't know but ..tis special.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Emma! I try to keep somethings to the reader's imagination when I write sensual poetry. I am of the school that believes a negligee can be more enticing than a naked body. Have a great weekend. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

Not so long ago I saw a photo in a magazine of an Italian actress, Sophis Lauren (?). She wearing a high necked, long sleeved, full length gown. She looked womanly, regal and stunning. The caption beneath it said something like: " This is what a real woman should look like, a secret and a beckoning at the same time.' That pretty well echoes what you've said, Lydi. Coincidental, yes?!

[Lydia Shutter]

Sophia Lauren is a REAL lady....even at her age. Thanks for sharing this. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

I'm good with trivia (however worthy) - it's just the facts that let me down!

[Lydia Shutter]

:) you have a great sense of humor!

[emmajoy]

Most of the time! Now must disappear off and dust - or something! Have a super.sweet weekend.

[Lydia Shutter]

You too ,my friend.

[emmajoy]

It's going well - so far!

[MsJewel]

Wow...sizzling and sensual, filled with passion in your elegant style. A delicious little Friday night treat and the perfect beginning to the weekend!

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Have a wonderful birthday weekend, Julie! Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work! The first stanza sucks the reader in, and then
you really take it from there, wording is great and the imagery to
match, really enjoyed this piece! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, James. I always appreciate your visits. Lydi**