every night before

artwork by michael and inessa garmash

the timeless taste of your kiss
lingers on my tongue
on the other side of morning
your scent on the sheets
                       just a tease
 eggs me on
                           so seductive
           you
my “esprit de corps”
each morning after
every night before

 

Reviews

[Sanober]

Heavy Sigh! Lydi, your poetry is one place that holds all the magic of the world. It can never leave your poetry. You had me at 'the timeless taste of your kiss'. Your words are so deeply sensuous... teasing and tantalizing the soul. All your romantic poetry is simply eternal, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

My dear Sanober, your words make me feel special. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[William S]

Your familiar verbiage is most pleasing and a joy to read...shine on my friend,William S AKA Bubby

[Lydia Shutter]

And it is you....so happy you are on this site, Bubster! I have missed your musing. Thank you for reviewing my words. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

Lovilness is much underated and this is full of tender lovliness.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Ken. I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

There is a tenderness... a wondrous feeling of dreaming woven through your words. Beautifully enchanting...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, my friend. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Soft, sensual, romantic, elegant...and simply "Lydi". You have a style all your own and I love everything about it. Your poem is stunning. I never get tired of reading you!

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Julie, you are a sweet friend. Thank you so much for the review. Sorry it took me so long to get to this...I was out of town. Lydi**

[Warren Daniel II]

Short and sweet! The poem may have been 11 lines but it spoke volumes, this poem is very descriptive, " the timeless taste of your kiss
lingers on my tongue" this was the perfect introduction which the poem needed.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Warren. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

(each morning after / every night before) You can't get more romantic that that Lydi! You've still got it kiddo. Love U! ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

And I intend to keep i! :) Thanks, Sharon. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

WAY TO GO SWEETUMS!!

[Miss Sharon]

I know I've already made comment on this lovely write my dear friend. I am just writing this now to "encourage" you to submit another poem soon. OK? Love U ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....when I have time, Sharon. We were away for a week and I am still catching up with life. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

;>0) Well, you're forgiven this time but don't make a habit of it! LOL ~Sharon

[Jimmy Yetts]

Stunning painting; great choice.
Your poem exudes desire and radiates class.
Sublimely romantic, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Frankie. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

"your scent on the sheets ... just a tease" Such a "Very Friday Night" kind of write with the perfect touch of lustful innuendo. Excellent. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

You've always been a big fan of my "Friday Night writes" and I so appreciate that, Jim. Lydi**

[Helen Crutchett]

Seductive and passionate Lydi. Much enjoyed. Great to read you again! Just opened my old group again here....would love you to join!


Kindest regards,

Helena :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks for the review, Helena. I really don't have time for the groups, sorry. Lydi**

[Helen Crutchett]

You are welcome Lydi! No problem dear, I understand!

Happy writing!

`~ Helena ~