mature rainbows

mature rainbows

A Poem by Lydia Shutter





the driving rain beckons me with a certain charisma
even though i'm way past 
the splashing-in-puddles stage of life
a crack in the window allows an epiphany to seep in
              sensible shoes 
scuffed with lots of experience aren’t as sexy
as the high heels now living in the back of my closet
but they won’t pinch my toes
they are the pot of gold at the end of my rainbow


i find myself smiling
while mature rainbows 
nod their understanding heads 
looking oh so appealing 
through afternoon clouds

© 2015 Lydia Shutter


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Those high-heel times were certainly glory days; the accompanying slink, wiggle and bounce intriguing to most men.
But sensible shoes always win out--in the same way that sensible guys eventually overtake the bad boys.
To this bad boy's lifelong disappointment.
Entertaining read, Lydi!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Smiling here...nah, most women still go for the bad boys even when they know they are not good for t.. read more


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Lydi...I picture you splashing in puddles..big puddles! Now go get those high heels from the back of the closet and have some fun this Valentines Day - puddles are waiting!!!

Hugs, Julie

100/100 stiletto heels - in red!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

:) we are going to dance the night away tonight....going to see a great band. Not wearing those st.. read more
MsJewel

9 Years Ago

You too Lydi! Happy Valentine's Day!
Those oh, so sensible shoes, simply mask the desire within.

It doesn't disappear with age, but simply lies in waiting with those high heels in the back of the closet.

Loved this. Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Loved your take on this, Beccy. Thank you. Have a great day. Lydi**
Every gal needs lots of shoes~variety is the essence.
But, high heels stop me, too.
mature is the answer on my feet and appealing to my feeling.
You capture the wonderful image of them here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Josie. Lydi**
Josie E. Cook M. A.

9 Years Ago

You are welcome! :)
I guess every woman have them or keep them for rainy days or remembrances of those golden pot days. This is soooo good Lydia with a sense of nostalgic humor. Excellent...:).....

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Not sure why I keep them. It's not as if I can walk in them anymore! LOL thanks for the review, S.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)......
My dear friend...it is good to read your words again! I miss you but hopefully will keep up with this site now that I have "re-found" it. LOL

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Sharon....nice to see you here. I have emailed you and not gotten answers. I thought you had been .. read more
Miss Sharon

9 Years Ago

LOL sweetie! I didn't see your emails for surely I could have answered you. I will try to do better... read more
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Happy Anniversary to you...may you laugh and love through many more. Take care. Lydi**
dear Lydi... I have a pair of white leather
High heels in my closet I bought a few
years ago! They want to be scuffed with
experience! Your poetry is wrapped
in delicious dreams of poetic rapture.
truly delightful... Pat

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

"Scuffed with experience" now there is a poetic line, Pat! Thank you so much. Lydi**
Those high-heel times were certainly glory days; the accompanying slink, wiggle and bounce intriguing to most men.
But sensible shoes always win out--in the same way that sensible guys eventually overtake the bad boys.
To this bad boy's lifelong disappointment.
Entertaining read, Lydi!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Smiling here...nah, most women still go for the bad boys even when they know they are not good for t.. read more
At 5'11", you wouldn't think I'd wear heels...oh, girl, can we talk! Oh, the pain we endured for fashion. I adore what you've done here, Lydi. But I can't believe you're past the stage of "splashing-in-the-puddles!! If only we were geographically closer...I'd change your mind!

Perhaps, they are "living in the back of the closet"...but they're worth the stories they conjure up, every time we slip into them. Bless you, girl!

Funny thing...I have a station for my phone where it sits and charges...its a high heel shoe, and its red. I'll take a photo of it and post it one day on here for you to see. ; )

Kelly

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

And my phone charging station is a clear high heeled shoe!!! We have a lot in common after all thes.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

9 Years Ago

Yeah, I usually get asked in the grocery store all the time, "could you reach that for me, hon?" L.. read more
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

:) and I am the one asking!
Wow, I want those shoes.....LOL But, I would be falling over in the mud puddles and miss the mature rainbows that don't have the pot of gold waiting at the end, but a big cauldron of "life experience, memories, wonderful yesterdays" in it! The high heels were nice while they were the "shoe for the day" but like everything else, at some point they just go out of fashion.
Love the images you paint! For me they just might include a pair of very comfortable bedroom shoes -LOL

Oh yes, and I love your avatar!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Sheila. The avatar was taken on a cruise my hubby and I took last month. Lydi**

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