Yup

Yup

A Poem by Lydia Shutter
"

Just having a little fun

"

artwork by Walter Robinson




Threading inhibitions
through a legal loophole
I impersonate a self assured adult
while in a tailspin of anxiety
or is that a state of turmoil?
in any case

            oh so very civilized


A throaty chortle
from the devil on my shoulder
seems like contraband
sure my blouse stays buttoned up
but my imagination is wide open


Stretching out
on a plump mattress of fantasy
society gratuitously winks
a blind eye at me


Potent and persuasive
phallic symbols sidle up
into my line of fire
so belly up to the bar boys
this prim and proper princess
is steadfast in her belief
yup the time is long overdue
for some naughty but nice fun









© 2014 Lydia Shutter


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That bellying up to the bar sounds painful--and likely to chafe.
Also,, your buttoned blouse bothers me no end; do you have any blouses without buttons--or better yet, missing a few?
I think we can clear up both these problems by changing the fourth line in the last stanza to:
"so belly up to the bra boys." Of course, you'd have to be wearing one.
Admire your work, Lydi.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Laughing here....a bit dyslexic, are we? LOL Thank you for this joyful review. Lydi**



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That bellying up to the bar sounds painful--and likely to chafe.
Also,, your buttoned blouse bothers me no end; do you have any blouses without buttons--or better yet, missing a few?
I think we can clear up both these problems by changing the fourth line in the last stanza to:
"so belly up to the bra boys." Of course, you'd have to be wearing one.
Admire your work, Lydi.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Laughing here....a bit dyslexic, are we? LOL Thank you for this joyful review. Lydi**
sure my blouse stays buttoned up
but my imagination is wide open - hmmmm salty and earthy Lydia - just how I like my poetry - YUP=YUM

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Anto! Lydi**
Oh how I await your naughty to be turned loose on these pages.
I can only imagine how brilliantly you could describe such things
As we love to do when the sun goes down and the sheets are split.

You have piqued my naughty interest beyond repair.

HUGGS. Trace

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

OMG....not even answering this one! LOL
Trace

9 Years Ago

Glad I made you smile.
Or was that a giggle
Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

a combo of both!
"sure my blouse stays buttoned up
but my imagination is wide open"
OH MY!! Lydi how do you hit a home run everytime! i love it when you are in a bit of a fun and sassy mood...we are treated to some of the most wittiest poetry ever written in history. Loved it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Smiling a big smile here....you know I am sometimes naughty! Thank you so much. Lydi**
This is one of those that not only fires up the imagination but leaves a smile on one's face long after the last line has been read and re-read. How I wish I had penned this myself..... All Good Things Lydi, N

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Wow, Neville....thank you so much. Lydi**
Neville

9 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely........................................... x
Wow. So much sass and sassafras in this one. Excellent write. ~Jim

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Smiling here....Jim, you have such a way with words, my friend. Thank you. Lydi**
This was great Lydi. A little fun, a little heat and one fantastic poem. I really enjoyed this one today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Will. Lydi**
My it's getting hot up in here. But in a lower key. I like it. Good job Lydia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I like to keep things to the imagination! Lydi**
Set those inhibitions free and have some naughty fun...a cleverly and elegant written piece here..a fun read..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed Fran Marie. Thank you. Lydi**
I think it's fun to have all sorts of things in my mind at a prim and proper buttoned up event. It makes for wonderful entertainment, and everyone wonders why you are so smiley.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Precisely! Thanks for understanding the gist of this, KL. I appreciate the review. Lydi**

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