Threading inhibitions
through a legal loophole
I impersonate a self assured adult
while in a tailspin of anxiety or is that a state of turmoil?
in any case
oh so very civilized
A throaty chortle
from the devil on my shoulder
seems like contraband
sure my blouse stays buttoned up
but my imagination is wide open
Stretching out
on a plump mattress of fantasy
society gratuitously winks
a blind eye at me
Potent and persuasive
phallic symbols sidle up
into my line of fire so belly up to the bar boys
this prim and proper princess
is steadfast in her belief
yup the time is long overdue
for some naughty but nice fun
That bellying up to the bar sounds painful--and likely to chafe.
Also,, your buttoned blouse bothers me no end; do you have any blouses without buttons--or better yet, missing a few?
I think we can clear up both these problems by changing the fourth line in the last stanza to:
"so belly up to the bra boys." Of course, you'd have to be wearing one.
Admire your work, Lydi.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Laughing here....a bit dyslexic, are we? LOL Thank you for this joyful review. Lydi**
That bellying up to the bar sounds painful--and likely to chafe.
Also,, your buttoned blouse bothers me no end; do you have any blouses without buttons--or better yet, missing a few?
I think we can clear up both these problems by changing the fourth line in the last stanza to:
"so belly up to the bra boys." Of course, you'd have to be wearing one.
Admire your work, Lydi.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Laughing here....a bit dyslexic, are we? LOL Thank you for this joyful review. Lydi**
Oh how I await your naughty to be turned loose on these pages.
I can only imagine how brilliantly you could describe such things
As we love to do when the sun goes down and the sheets are split.
You have piqued my naughty interest beyond repair.
HUGGS. Trace
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Do I need to slap your face, Trace? LOL Thanks for the wonderful review...you know I can write sen.. read moreDo I need to slap your face, Trace? LOL Thanks for the wonderful review...you know I can write sensual poetry because you have read it in the past. Lydi**
9 Years Ago
I love your sensual
I want your naughty.....
Ok you can slap my a*s...... I mean .. read moreI love your sensual
I want your naughty.....
"sure my blouse stays buttoned up
but my imagination is wide open"
OH MY!! Lydi how do you hit a home run everytime! i love it when you are in a bit of a fun and sassy mood...we are treated to some of the most wittiest poetry ever written in history. Loved it!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Smiling a big smile here....you know I am sometimes naughty! Thank you so much. Lydi**
This is one of those that not only fires up the imagination but leaves a smile on one's face long after the last line has been read and re-read. How I wish I had penned this myself..... All Good Things Lydi, N
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Wow, Neville....thank you so much. Lydi**
9 Years Ago
My pleasure entirely........................................... x
I think it's fun to have all sorts of things in my mind at a prim and proper buttoned up event. It makes for wonderful entertainment, and everyone wonders why you are so smiley.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Precisely! Thanks for understanding the gist of this, KL. I appreciate the review. Lydi**