I Miss You

written in 2011 after the death of my cousin

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Pistil and stamen
create abundant blossoms
their blatant beauty
nearly clamorous


Sunlight shrinks back
numinous stars spin out of control
in deference to the semiotics
truly impossible to grasp

Something in life seems undone
in these shadows created
and it’s all because
I miss you

Reviews

[David Scott]

Interesting perspective on loss Lydi. You craft the art around the meaning this person held for you in their living days. You frame your mood in your sense of losing a person who had a special place in the galaxy or garden of your heart. I like how you tie yourself to this person still in the poetic expression.
There is a profound sense of a life lived with meaning even in the sense of sorrow.
I will internalize this lesson I think.

[Lydia Shutter]

My cousin and I were like brother and sister. I don't think I will ever get over his death...and it's been four years now. His life and mine were so intertwined, part of me died when he did. Thank you for you kind review. Lydi**

[David Scott]

I believe we will never "get over" our losses her on Earth... We can only accept the reality of it and be thankful for the meaning we found while we were yet privileged to enjoy the bountiful blessing of those we love for always.
However, I believe we will have a reunion and find a more blessed intimacy of spirit with the souls we endure without for now...
Until then, we can enjoy the beginnings of new friendships and heart connections.
I could sense you strong tie to your cousin Lydi. You gave me a distinct impression you lost a true kindred spirit.
It was a pleasure to read and review your fine poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

David, you are a special person.....you are caring and inspirational. Again, thank you.

[David Scott]

Even though I cannot seem to spell worth a darn. ha.
You too, are special to me.

[Lydia Shutter]

We belong to a mutual admiration society! :)

[Troy Henson]

Lydi this is beautiful. Truly touching. Thank you!

Troy

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Troy. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

I'm at a loss for words Lydi - you have touched me deeply...

Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Julie. Lydi**

[Fran Marie]

such profound sadness within this piece...sorry for your loss...you write and express such heartfelt

feelings which we feel when death comes calling...lovely poem, Lydi;

[Lydia Shutter]

Poetry gets me through the tough times in life...always has. Thanks, Fran Marie. Lydi**

[Fran Marie]

yes, me too.. you are so welcome;

[Sanober]

I think I remember reading this one....and once again, it has moved me to tears. I cannot imagine life without any of my cousins. they bring their own magic, add their own blossoms to our world in a way that no friend or spouse can. as always, the emotions are so delicately wrapped around your words. "something in life seems undone". sigh! So poignant, so beautiful my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

You definitely did read it, Sanober....and I am sure you left a heartfelt comment then too. Thank you so much. I was thinking about my cousin this week more than usual...not sure why. Just happens sometimes. Lydi**

[Trace]

I seem to remember this from the SC.
But it is still and maybe even more poignant.

Have a wonderful weekend.
Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes,it was written 3 years ago. Thanks, Trace. Lydi**

[MomzillaNC]

Oh… such a very touching write of bitter-sweet remembrance.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. Lydi**

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The profoundity of death is encapsulated in this elegantly sad piece Lydi

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, John. Lydi**

[stars are far]

that was very sad, truely , i can relate with the loss of y aunt ... she was young and she was like my friend but she passed away :'(.. yeah.. sad things. well exressed

[Lydia Shutter]

We all go through loss in life...writing poetry helps me deal with the emotions. Thank you. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and thoughts.
I like how you led the reader to strong ending in each paragraph.
"I miss you"
Missing place and person leave us yearning for better place. Thank you Lydia for your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

And thank you, my friend, for always leaving such lovely reviews. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.