Simple Words On A Page

Simple Words On A Page

A Poem by Lydia Shutter


Artwork by Jo Pickering

Courtesy of  littlemissprinted on etsy.com





In a different light
my simple words on the page
might be eloquent
read perhaps from a different angle
with a bit of sunlight streaming in
from half opened blinds


Possibly a bit of music playing
would soften the syllables
make them more satiny
a bit more palpable


I know, a spritz of perfume
a gingery musky enticement
would morph my mere words
into feathery phrases
whispered articulations
meant for intellectuals


Ah, but the truth lies here
naked and unashamed
not needing or wanting
to be classified
as anything more
than my simple words on the page

© 2014 Lydia Shutter


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I like how you use physical nakedness as the metaphor for our writing.
Being comfortable with "nakedness" is a two way street however. We might be fine with our transparency of expression and wish we could have others be transparent with us, but others might not feel comfortable with either observing the naked soul or baring theirs at all...
I think this world is full of people wishing they were comfortable enough but always needing a bit of a barrier.
I find myself "streaking" my emotions through the half time show of life's little games at times... It usually does not go well. Ha. :)
Here, when it is intimate and for those who seek it, the naked expression is perfect!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

"I find myself "streaking" my emotions through the half time show of life's little games at times" .. read more



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the most simple words and true emotions (are to me anyway) the best kind ..naked and sincere showing from the soul...exquisite piece..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend. Lydi**
Lydi.... a butterfly lands softly on your words...
an omen of healing words and Joy unsurpassed.
truly ... Pat

Posted 10 Years Ago


There's nothing simple, here, as I know, the power that words have, upon us, whether it be positive or negative. Lydia, your poem speaks with a depth and elegance, few can match.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Therisa! Lydi**
therisa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome, Lydia.
Simple words can become very complex, especially when transferred from the pen to the mouth...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks again, Steve. Lydi*
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B.J
That is absolutely lovely, full of emtion dedicated to words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Yes, words are very important to me. Thank you. Lydi*
B.J

10 Years Ago

you're welcome
I like how you use physical nakedness as the metaphor for our writing.
Being comfortable with "nakedness" is a two way street however. We might be fine with our transparency of expression and wish we could have others be transparent with us, but others might not feel comfortable with either observing the naked soul or baring theirs at all...
I think this world is full of people wishing they were comfortable enough but always needing a bit of a barrier.
I find myself "streaking" my emotions through the half time show of life's little games at times... It usually does not go well. Ha. :)
Here, when it is intimate and for those who seek it, the naked expression is perfect!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

"I find myself "streaking" my emotions through the half time show of life's little games at times" .. read more
Champagne would be nice too, but nothing could make your poetry any more beautiful than it already is. I really enjoyed this Lydi, the poetess speaks and I listen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Will, your reviews make me feel so talented. Thank you! Lydi**
willweb

10 Years Ago

And your poetry proves it, Lydi.
Ah, but truth lies here
naked and unashamed
not needing or wanting
to be classified
as anything more
than my simple words on the page


I absolutely loved this stanza!
Very well penned!
-Love Anahat :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Anahat. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
Ah, but truth lies here
naked and unashamed
not needing or wanting
to be classified
as anything more
than my simple words on the page

Oh my Dear Lady this was more than simple words on the page, it was beautiful! I loved the last stanza! So well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your simple words lying on a page can completely change the aura of the world around me, Lydi. On a bad day, i know your simple words will bring sunshine and comfort. on a good day, i know your simple words will come and double my happiness. and now i have come to associate the scent of ginger with your poetry. ;) your simple words don't need much...true..all they need is a poetry lover...and i'm so grateful for that gift and sensitivity to poetry because i get to fully savor yours! so blessed to read you. A tremendously heartfelt and elegant write, my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I don't even know how to thank you for the wonderful words you have left me here, sweet Sanober. Yo.. read more
Sanober

10 Years Ago

What a sweet thing to say, Lydi. I am very glad we met. I'd be missing out on a lot in life if i had.. read more
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

(((((((((((Sanober)))))))))))))))))))))) my sweet friend. Thank you!

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