we inspire one another....and that is so wonderful!
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your words give birth to mine
massaging my world
sparking it
bestowing inspiration
with kisses of thought
my fingertips tingle
dancing with rhythmic syllables
my thoughts sway very near yours never quite touching them propriety being what it is
reigning over separate spherical empires
swollen with connotation
they ramble at times
like an old woman’s thoughts
yet they design a mellifluous language
i yearn to speak fluently
You've very clearly said how we borrow each others thoughts.We can' t be accused of plagiary.. We inspire each other to write.. i liked the line which "respects social propriety" ,we don't ape lines.. but our same thoughts are penned differently- every poet has a unique style. Liked the message of it :) liked the title" your words"- clearly prepares the reader to experience the impàct of his words on others.
Unfortunately, there is plenty of plagiarism on the internet....I was a victim of it myself. Using .. read moreUnfortunately, there is plenty of plagiarism on the internet....I was a victim of it myself. Using concepts and running with them is one thing, but using the same words in the same phrase in a poem, well, that is not legal...and not ethical either. Thank you for your review, Sophy. May you always be inspired by the wonderful writers at the WC. Lydi**
10 Years Ago
I am really sorry for what happened Lydi :(... And yea you all are like a great inspiration for me.I.. read moreI am really sorry for what happened Lydi :(... And yea you all are like a great inspiration for me.I strive towards perfection.seeing writers like you..Always a pleasure to visit you.
And I yearn to speak your language Lydia, always such beauty appears when I read your words and this was no exception. A gorgeous poem today that I really enjoyed.
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10 Years Ago
Glad you enjoyed, Will. Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**
now this is poetry "spiced" up.. I love it.. you have such enchanting magic in your writing, that captivates me to continue reading, hanging on each syllable letting it roll sensually off my senses.. This one is no exception.. absolutely adore this..
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10 Years Ago
April, thank you very much for the wonderful review. Lydi**
10 Years Ago
You're more than welcome. It was definitely my pleasure.. Added to my fav's so I can revisit and enj.. read moreYou're more than welcome. It was definitely my pleasure.. Added to my fav's so I can revisit and enjoy again and again.. :)
reigning over separate spherical empires
swollen with connotation
they ramble at times
like an old woman’s thoughts
yet they design a mellifluous language
i yearn to speak fluently
Perfectly poetic, and accurate Lydikey...you certainly can translate the mundane into something magical, you know I felt this one joisey, so apropos! You inspire me all the time....speak fluent poetry, what a concept!
Love the 'old woman's thoughts'...........
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10 Years Ago
Hey, I AM an old woman! :) Thank you, my joisey cohort.....always appreciate your visits! Lydi**
10 Years Ago
Oh Lydikey Lydikey, you're a silly woman, you'll always be young at heart!
10 Years Ago
That much is true...silly and young. Hey, why not? LOL
Only way to go, we might have some crinkles but they tell the story of how we got to this dang place.. read moreOnly way to go, we might have some crinkles but they tell the story of how we got to this dang place! haha
10 Years Ago
And we earned each and every one of them! Have a great day, Frieda. I am outta here.
10 Years Ago
Indeed, but we're not sharing those secrets today, enjoy Lydi!