you weave starlight

graphic courtesy of pinterest

you weave starlight
through the curls in my hair
allow me to wear the moon
as a party dress
one that sways seductively
in the warm night breeze


sharing a smiling silence
no filters or secrets
come between us
wrapped in the rolling mist
of a memorable summer night
i am transported to the place
i’ll always belong

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

sharing a smiling silence
no filters or secrets
come between us
wrapped in the rolling mist
of a memorable summer night
i am transported to the place
i’ll always belong

I loved this stanza. Gorgeous write :)
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[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Anand. Lydi**

[willweb]

Another wonderful, moivng, loving and caring poem from your pen Lydi. You do write so beautifully. Your heart shines in every thing I read from you and what a gorgeous sight it is.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a sweet thing to say. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Steve L.]

Wow!!! I can feel the passion in this piece!!!

allow me to wear the moon
as a party dress
one that sways seductively
in the warm night breeze

Amazing!!!!

[Lydia Shutter]

I am very grateful for your lovely review. Lydi**

[Beccy]

Such a gorgeous poem. The first four line are just the loveliest I have read in a while and the moon as a party dress is a beautiful thought.

Beccy.

[Lydia Shutter]

Beccy, I appreciate your lovely review. Lydi**

[Horizon K.]

This is beautiful... Makes me imagine myself as a moonbeam, laying in a summer evenings bedroom, sharing all of my unfiltered secrets, with my love... A place to belong, indeed...

[Lydia Shutter]

What a poetic review this is. You are certainly a romantic! Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Lydia Shutter]

There is such a gift you share with your pen my friend... I always feel so happy to read you.
What a beautiful brief vacation you gave me with your words. Pure class... !!

So enjoyed this one, amazing poetry Lydi! -xx-

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you once again, my friend. You really make my days brighter. Lydi**

So do you Lydi!! such a ray of positivism you are, even in thos hurtful days, you are a true survivor my sweet friend... ((((LYDI)))) knuffels!

[Lyn Anderson]

Such a lovely romantic piece. This really is a superb verse. Glad to see you posting more poems again.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks! I was away for a few months. Going to try to hang out here more again! :)

[Tom]

A passionate encounter, words are not required when a love such as this is so deeply embracing. Sweet surrender at its finest, splendid Lydia !

[Lydia Shutter]

Tom, your reviews are always so kind. Thank you, my friend. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

i am transported to the place
i’ll always belong
So soothing, beautiful, excellent natural flow, mild jealous of those in that place always

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Trace]

What a beautiful poem
So soft and sensual and just downright pretty.

Loved it.
Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Trace. Lydi**