how much

there is something very special about spending time with either of my granddaughters

         

painting by elaine feliciano courtesy of etsy.com NYoriginalpaintings

 

                    today

                                     you skipped

across the tense span of my life

scattering the baggage i've been forced to carry

                to parts unknown

          it’s true

while the sun was high in the sky

the strangely familiar flavor of happiness

danced across my taste buds

like spring rain watering flowers

your smile nourished my soul

                    that’s why

i’ll always write you poems full of sweetness

even put some icing and sprinkles on the top

hoping someday you will understand

how much your oma loves you

 

Author's Note

I spent the afternoon with my oldest granddaughter today. What a boost for my attitude. Just love my granddaughters!

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

what a beautiful sentiment.. you can feel the pure joy and love in this one girl.. I hope you are saving these for them to read later... imagery is whimsical and playful, it makes my heart smile as your radiant spirit dances across the page in sheer bliss.. what a sight to behold.. just lovely...

[Lydia Shutter]

I am, April....and they know I write poetry about them. They are the light in my life. Thanks for your review. Lydi**

[AprilRN1210]

you're more than welcome.. and that is awesome.. something that all of you can treasure.. warms my heart..

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi... the poem site has displayed this poem
from five years ago. It is as fresh and meaningful
as the day it was posted. It always amazes me
that your poetry is timeless. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Hi Pat, I didn't know this was displayed again, but I am so happy you read it and reviewed it. Thank you, my friend. Lydi**

[Daydreamer]

Aw! So skillfully written! So sweet and honest!
A 98/100 from my humble side 😇

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Manal. Lydi*

[David Scott]

A "German" treat from a loving grandmother... One scoop or two? :)
Fun thoughts.

[Lydia Shutter]

Actually Dutch...my family is all from Holland and that is why I am "Oma". thanks, David. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

"i’ll always write you poems full of sweetness
even put some icing and sprinkles on the top
hoping someday you will understand
how much your oma loves you"
I enjoyed the poem. Especially the above words. Always a pleasure to read your poetry my Poet friend.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. LYdi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Mark]

What a wonderful poem full of.love and light. Grandkids are the best aren't they? We get the good stuff and our kids handle the bad lol

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it, Mark. Thanks for the review. lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

We sometimes decry the true value of sweetness and innocence here. Or at least some of us do. Some of us are also very envious that some can write about this and so eloquently as well.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ken, thank you for such a lovely review. When it comes to my granddaughters, emotions flow freely. Lydi**

[John Anderson]

I really like this poem. It is unique and very cleverly written. Very nice work.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

'.. the strangely familiar flavor of happiness ~ danced across my taste buds ~ like spring rain watering flowers .. '

Truly didn't notice this was for a grandchild but, felt an innocent, light-as-light call to and need for a free, relaxed and shiny bright real life!

[Lydia Shutter]

Emma, thank you so much. I have been away...and so very busy. I did not see this review till today. I apologize for the late thanks. Be well. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

Never need to say a 'sorry' about living your life, Lydi! Coming back to see what you've written means i can read this again - tis so lovely.x

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you sweet friend.

[JenniferMarie]

What a lovely poem. "like spring rain watering flowers" beautiful image. Sweet message to your granddaughters. :) I enjoyed this poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Jennifer. Lydi**