I Want To Be

The first Friday Night Write in a long time......

Artwork by Monica Gomes

courtesy of “Smogartist” at etsy.com

I want to be…..

the cologne evaporating on your chest
as the air conditioner swirls over your skin
after a shower

the merlot tickling your tongue
as a vapor trail of crystal beads slips down your goblet
to kiss your hand

the sweetly sensual thought making you smile
sating your every hunger
in the middle of a routine day

a droplet of nourishment for your soul
the soothing sensation for which you search
when the world is too rough

the tune you hum to yourself
without even thinking about it
loving how it makes you feel

I want to be yours

Author's Note

A special thank you to two of my friends, Jim and Pat, who urged me to post a Friday night write.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Their are people in my life who do this for me... Just thinking about them is as real as if I actually were sipping the wine. It is heavenly and I feel it indicates a mental maturity to be satisfied in this experience of the mind. Of course I'm not ready to turn away the flesh at t his point either. Ha.
This is a good desire to have however Lydi. To be the joy in another person's day or life is a blessing beyond receiving our own dreams for ourselves.
Lovely poetry from a lovely poet!

[Lydia Shutter]

David, your reviews make me stand a little taller and smile a little more. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful day. Lydi**

[David Scott]

Well now I am standing taller, or at least sitting up straighter. :)
Thank you for being who you are and for sharing your delightful poetry here with us all.
I am happy to see you found a little bit of sunshine.

[Lydia Shutter]

:) have a good day, David!

[MsJewel]

Welcome back Lydi. How I have missed your Friday night writes...and this one is lovely..
Too many wonderful lines to pick my favorite. A keeper that I will read again and again.
Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Julie. Lydi**

[h d e rushin]

"the tune you hum to yourself
without even thinking about it
loving how it makes you feel."

You write so tenderly Lydia. As if there is a solemn agreement, an oath to doing so by law or
moral influence. I consider the woman writers that come here to be the finest poetry writers in
the world . Each one of you bring a different perspective and knowledge to this site.

I appreciate everything you do.
lovely write,
dana

ps: and thanks for that review........

[Lydia Shutter]

You are quite welcome, Dana. I appreciate the lovely reviews you leave on my words. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

I must first thank Jim and Pat for encouragement to post another Friday night write. Your words are sensual and romantic........oh, the droplets on that glass are making some kind of delicious mist!! Perhaps it shall kiss more than just the hand........lol
Oh yes!! And what a lovely image.....adore it!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Sheila. There was a time I never allowed a Friday to slip by without a special write.....but life has altered my schedule considerably. I am pleased you liked this one. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is incredible...what i want to be to be close to you...i am reminded of Romeo.."see how she leans her cheek upon her hand, ah but i were a glove upon that hand that i may touch that cheek."

[Lydia Shutter]

I am honored by your review, Jacob.....a Shakepearean quote! YES....this makes my night! Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

I think the answer to that query is obvious. What a lovely love write.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Ken. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

"...the merlot tickling your tongue as a vapor trail of crystal beads slips down your goblet to kiss your hand". Wow. This mongrel is more than happy with this delightful morsel of a Friday Night write. You always play with words in a fashion that obviously contains passion, but never is it sullied with cheapness or smut. You have once again reminded me just why I read poetry. Consider this a bouquet of roses tossed upon your stage. Bravo. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Picking up the rose petals and savoring them here, my friend. Thank you so very much, Jim....for the review and for reminding me how good it feels to juggle words. Lydi**

[s y e]

This is beautiful Lydia. A truly wonderful, inspirational read from you. I am so glad to see you writing and back on the cafe, I missed my little Diamond. :-)

[Lydia Shutter]

You are such a sweetie, Sye. Thank you very much. Lydi**

[kublakhan27]

Sounds like a great way to spend a Friday night to me, be it the poetry or, well an adaptation let's say. Every stanza carries its own little pockets of delightful sensuality, with some very unique metaphors to boot. A sultry and seductive ride you've taken me on here Lydi :)

[Lydia Shutter]

An E ticket ride for sure! LOL Thank you so much. Lydi**

[kublakhan27]

LOL I'll be first in line for that...always a pleasure :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is exquisite. And so sweetly romantic and sensual. Gorgeous, as always. Glad to see your stuff again.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much! Lydi**

[Jack...]

I saw that conversation about the Friday night write and I have just been sitting back here in the shadows waiting. Very beautiful and filled with love a desire my friend. It is so nice to see your work on this screen again my friend. This poem today has placed a smile where it hasn't been in a while.

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you so very much, Jack. Life has not been kind the last couple months, but I am here....and still kicking! I appreciate your review more than you know. Lydi**

[Jack...]

My sweet friend, you were truly missed. I hope you find many sunny days ahead.