Small Victory

Small Victory

A Poem by Lydia Shutter


artwork by Carli Clark

courtesty of mysweetwhimsydesigns at etsy.com





Breathing in angst

till I’m puffed up by stress

like a helium balloon

        even the Michelin man is more svelte

a tempest rents space in the teapot of my soul

no way to iron out the wrinkles in my psyche

waiting for the phone to ring

times movement is excruciatingly slow

        has the earth stopping rotating?

yet teardrops of morning dew

paint rainbows on the lawn

the beauty distracts me

ahhhhh

        breathing out

                small victory

© 2014 Lydia Shutter


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There is nothing like being distracted by beauty....a rainbow of morning dew? oh yes! Enough to get by. This is simply gorgeous, my friend. Sometimes all we really need is that breath of fresh air...and everything's fine for a moment. Beautifully written, Lydi.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Exactly....nature can heal. Thank you, Sanober. Lydi**



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you always write so well Lyd, I loved loved this one

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Cassie. Lydi**
this is TRUE anticipation, but a diversion of anticipation at the end. Fantastic!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Coll. Lydi**
Those small victories are of the greatest importance to the soul...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

You know it, Rita. Thanks for stopping by. Lydi**
Small victories are some of the best ones

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

You know it! thanks, Lydi**
I'm wishing for you a day of rainbows Lydi. Hugs, Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Julie. Lydi**
even the Michelin man is more svelte.....clever
Waiting for the phone to ring...aren't we all...
So nice to read this..it is refreshing and shaded with some anxiety.
Kudos Miss Lydia..
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Scott. lydi**
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott........
Nothing like a soothing moment to salvage the stressful moments...I felt this way this morning then travelled home and stared out at the atmospheric fog here...thank the stars for nature ey? x

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Exactly, Poppy. Thanks for the review. Lydi**
Stressful things and events make us mad but because we are people who really appreciates something good in every single way...our emotions may change...and that's the small victory.

Another optimistic concept, Lydi. You're great!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Dh. I always appreciate your reviews. lydi**
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. =)
getting by in circumstances we can not control can be so hard, maybe seeing the smaller picture as you
portray in your poem, the small victories, the stepping stones that in the end lead to the bigger picture,
maybe thats the way to go

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

For me, Paddy, it is the only way. Thank you so much for the review. Lydi**
paddy d daly

10 Years Ago

You are welcome,
Another write , that contains a happy take home. You are into a phase of hope. Very good work. loved it.
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I try to be optimistic whenever possible. Thank you, Anand. lydi**

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