"I pilfer a noun, pairing it with a purloined verb"
Your knowledge of the English language serves you well in your poetry,
and to include it in your poetry is pure genius.
I am not sure I know the difference ( but I fake it quite well ) (I think)
Always enjoy your work.
Trace
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Trace, you have poetic talent....a lot of it. Never try to put yourself down in my presence...that'.. read moreTrace, you have poetic talent....a lot of it. Never try to put yourself down in my presence...that's an order! :) Thanks for the review. Lydi**
Ohhh, smooth and precious! I could feel this cradled into my sides and heart...like how one feels when they cannot put down a good book lol Beautiful Lydi! x
Reading is a joy you never outgrow and "borrowing " those nouns and verbs to bring sunshine to your life at a later time is one of its many gifts. Wonderful poem, Lydi, I really enjoyed reading it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I appreciate your reviews, Joyce. Thank you. Lydi*
"I pilfer a noun, pairing it with a purloined verb"
Your knowledge of the English language serves you well in your poetry,
and to include it in your poetry is pure genius.
I am not sure I know the difference ( but I fake it quite well ) (I think)
Always enjoy your work.
Trace
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Trace, you have poetic talent....a lot of it. Never try to put yourself down in my presence...that'.. read moreTrace, you have poetic talent....a lot of it. Never try to put yourself down in my presence...that's an order! :) Thanks for the review. Lydi**
Thrive means to flourish, to prosper, to succeed....though it was not used in the poem. Hope that h.. read moreThrive means to flourish, to prosper, to succeed....though it was not used in the poem. Hope that helps you. Thanks for stopping by. Lydi*
10 Years Ago
no you used this word in your poem
of delicious knowledge
under which i thrive
i p.. read moreno you used this word in your poem
of delicious knowledge
under which i thrive
i pilfer a noun
pairing it with a purloined verb this will help me at large extent