in your dreams

it's friday!

“dancing queen” by dyanne parker

courtesy of etsy.com dyanneparkerart

my red dress
will hang
on the chair
beside you
leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine

penetrating desire
will embrace us
as dionysus
winks from
the mirror
channeling secrets
of carnal pleasure

just for tonight
let me lie down
in your dreams
where threads
of passion
will meander
‘tween fibers of lust
and all will be right
with the world

Reviews

[MsJewel]

my red dress
will hang
on the chair
beside you
leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine...

Your Friday night writes are just as passionate on a Wednesday night.
This is so simple and yet so softly sensual and elegant...I am speechless. You have outdone yourself.

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you sweet friend of mine. I so appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[redzone]

"leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine"... and these lines leaving me with Friday "dreaming" and and visual anticipations that only a Lydi poem can arouse... and it's the sensual scent of "jasmine" that escapes from the computer and adds to the delight that now roams my room, looking for er.. ah... ~~red(bloodpressurerising)zone
if I add this to my favorites, it will burn library down... oh to hell with it its added... oh my, its not smoke I smell, its jasmine... LYDI!!!!! ;o)

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....bloodpressurerising.....as well it should be. After all, it's too damn cold in the big apple. Time to warm you up! :) Thanks for the great review, Curt. Have a wonderful weekend....and keep smelling that jasmine. Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

These thoughts and wishes are woven in the warmest, brightest fabric... how sensually inviting in every way. May your weekend be ever so perfect as your poetry. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely thing to say, Craig. Thank you for this review...you have a wonderful weekend. Lydi**

[Jack...]

Lydi, beautiful as usual. You are always creating wonderful poetic worlds in my mind.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Jack. lydi**

[Frieda P]

I want to lie down in this poem and just marinate within these words...sigh. Luverly Lydikey

'tween fibers of lust' oooh lala ma ami ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

I just love your reaction to this poem, Frieda. "Marinate within these words" and then who will stick the fork in you to see if you are done? That Latino lover? Giggling here. Thank you, Frieda. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Hahahaha...one can only hope, you crack me up Lydi. Always my pleasure, you blow my skirt up each and every time lady!

[Lydia Shutter]

:) Hey, my Friday night writes are SUPPOSED to do that! :)

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and tempting words. I like the red dress laying aside and allowing the imagination to run free. Nice description led the reader to good places and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Coyote. Lydi**