morning

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It’s morning
the language of the wind
     spirited

          almost animated
               in its brisk alacrity
speaks softly to me
as stars wave adieu
from pockets of night

My universe tilts
as the first rays of sun
kiss my neck
for a moment
life is transparent 
lies become truths
yearnings are fulfilled

Yes

      I feel life
this morning

Author's Note

captcha = realness....and that is what this poem is all about!

Reviews

[Pax]

Ahh, the morning... it’s often revitalizing when you had a good rest from last night. This piece speaks of beauty in the early dawn, a feel good poem. It’s like your words embrace warmth from the early rise of the sun. It’s simply beautiful!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Pax. Lydi**

[Cassie]

This is a very beautiful morning message....thank you for sharing.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Cassie. Lydi**

[paddy d daly]

this sends a kind of warmth through me, it feels like it has opened up something to me that i dont yet
understand, but thats ok, just means i have to go on a new learning curve as l suppose we all have

[Lydia Shutter]

We all learn something with each day that passes....sometimes it is so small we don't realize it has seeped into the psyche. I am pleased you reacted this way to my words. Thank you for the review. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

spirited
almost animated
in its brisk alacrity

You morning people always so happy ;)

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here...yup, I am up with the sun, but don't catch me after 10 PM! :) Thanks, Pryde. LydI**

[Frieda P]

Wooo, I'm exhilarated just reading this...feel as though someone planted one on my neck in this moment!
Love the word alacrity, I think this is the first time I've read it in a poem. A grand feeling coming from your page this day Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Keep that feeling going through the rest of the day, Frieda....and may the world kiss your neck in just the right spot EVERY morning! Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Well then, you're stuck with me, I'll have to come back and read again & again, no one here to kiss my neck unfortunately! ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here.....you are welcome on my page any day, any time...but words do not kiss like a ginger scented guy does! :)

[Frieda P]

HA......! Any of them floating around in FL? ;-

[Lydia Shutter]

I don't really know.....plenty of good looking men, but I am not really shopping.

[Frieda P]

Not for you silly goose, if you trip over any hot Latinos let me know. ;-)

[Jack...]

I didn't want to let this out but my real name is Juan Patricio Ivenez...just saying.

[Frieda P]

Hahahahhaa, I thought it was Brock. ;-P

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here....only Latino lotharios need apply? :)

[Jack...]

Lydi, thank you for inviting us to your beautiful day. So very soft and delicate are your words that my smile grew more and more as I read. Nothing is more beautiful than a sunrise except maybe the poet who penned these wonderful words today.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely thing to say, Jack. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Wow Lydia. You have that Midas touch or pen for you turn every situation into beauty and precious moments to behold...Splendid to say the least...:)...........
I love the pic too...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Sami. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)..................