you have me

artwork by Tony Max

courtesy of etsy.com

through arms of afternoon
you have me
way past warm
i burn
into ashes of desire
you breathe sex
through lips
longing to be covered by mine
bending closer to passion’s voice
i admit it
my soul is thirsty
oh yes, you have me

Reviews

[David Scott]

Again, you show classy sensuality. You do have a gift for this. I did not want to blush or feel uncomfortable, but I had no doubt the level of passion and desire you were relaying to the reader.
Happy Freakin New Year Baby!!!
Smoke em if ya got em.

[Lydia Shutter]

I am actually laughing out loud here...smoke if you got em indeed! You have a way with words, David. Happy New Year to you too! :) thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Joyce S. Greene]

A very hot little poem, Lydi. Love your introductory line, "through arms of afternnoon" - totally original and very suggestive of love in the afternoon . . . May you write romantic verse forever and a day!

[Lydia Shutter]

What a sweet thing to say, Joyce. Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

I can't describe the scene this set in my mind, but I will try. The voice of this piece comes off in a sensual whisper, like a lover who has just pulled me in close. Excellent write!

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, yes, you described the scene perfectly, my friend. Thank you so much for this great review. Lydi**

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was a great write.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sensually erotic and punchy with a feisty independence to it Lydia.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, John. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Smokin' hot Lydikey....you go girl! This one smacked me in the head and flipped me over...you had me. ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Flipped you over? So you were jazzed then? LOL Thanks so much, Frieda. lydi**

[Frieda P]

Hahaha extremely jazz'd. ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Tres bien, mon amie! :)

[Frieda P]

Ooooh la la, I love it when you speak French to moi! ;-)

[Lydia Shutter]

giggling here...have a great afternoon, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

You too Lydi, thanks...........

[PoetryPenPal]

Wow, that was really good. I love the line ,"Through arms of afternoon..." It is a beautiful line.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[PoetryPenPal]

Your welcome. You deserve it!

[paddy d daly]

concise and full of passion and may i say straight to the point, lol, i really like it

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Paddy. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

And out of those ashes the fire burns again and again to quench the thirst of a soul of passion! Sensual, romantic, captivating way to bring a whisper to a scream..........love it!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Sheila. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I have someone to share this sentiment with...thanks for giving me the words....beautiful..

jacob

[Lydia Shutter]

How wonderful! Thank you, Jacob. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

I almost feel as though you and Frieda are playing call and answer and the rest of us can't the server to come to our table. Great write.

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here....Frieda is such a romantic writer. To be compared with her is an honor for me, Pryde. Thanks....for the review too. Your new photo is gorgeous! Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you.