just sometimes

just sometimes

A Poem by Lydia Shutter


photo courtesy of localbozo.com



thousands will watch in awe tuesday night
as a manmade ball glows its way excruciatingly slowly
to the bottom of the tower
voila, the new year will arrive right on schedule

but you will be off chasing the illusive rainbow
still certain the man of your dreams will jump out of it and hug you
believing that cinderella and the tooth fairy live in never never land
right next door to tinkerbelle

particles of dust never collect on your rose colored glasses
yet specks of joy seem to mix and mingle there
you’ve stored the weight of your world inside that glowing ball
and tuesday night it will crash and burn as you smile......

and sometimes, just sometimes, I wish I could be you.....

© 2013 Lydia Shutter


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Sometimes i wish i could live like that too....in a dreamland never taking off those rose-coloured glasses. with the heart of a child ...chasing rainbows and dreams...and yet, we can't always live in denial, no? Dreams are so beautiful, reality is so harsh. The ultimate truth of life. This is just brilliantly written, Lydi.

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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I am a realist...you know that. However, a very good friend of mine still sees the world the way I .. read more



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It would be nice to be able to view the world as though it were always wonderful. This is a great poem. Thank you for posting it. I very much enjoy your writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

You are so kind, Brittany. Thank you, my friend. Lydi**
I think Ive lived most of my life with rose colored glasses on. I am a dreamer and a thinker and always have hope that sometimes maybe just once that dreams can come true.

Thank you for sharing

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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I hope for your sake your dreams do come to fruition! Thanks for your review. Lydi**
Sometimes i wish i could live like that too....in a dreamland never taking off those rose-coloured glasses. with the heart of a child ...chasing rainbows and dreams...and yet, we can't always live in denial, no? Dreams are so beautiful, reality is so harsh. The ultimate truth of life. This is just brilliantly written, Lydi.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I am a realist...you know that. However, a very good friend of mine still sees the world the way I .. read more
Happy New Year darling, you truly do create magic, well done x

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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

WOW, quite the review. Thanks. Lydi**
Is there a place where dreams are as solid as reality ? And are dreams worth less than what is now before us ?
These are things that your write sparked in me the moment I read your lines...how odd.
Enjoyed this Miss Lydia.
Hoping you have a great new year..may you find a hidden box of words that will satisfy you through 2014.
Scott

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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

"A hidden box of words" what a splendid thought! Thank you very much, Scott. Happy New Year to yo.. read more
vicariously blissful...the 2nd stanza is excellent


Thank you and JUMP !!!

Peace

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your review. Lydi**
Great poem, Lydi. I loved the imagery in this one. Those who dream and walk around with stars in their eyes do sometimes crash and burn, but at least they enjoy the moment and don't have to live to regret all the moments they've wasted in endless worry. I truly envy them!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

There is one particular friend of mine who has always had that attitude in life. At times, I think .. read more
I guess we all wish sometimes we could be that other person just to see what it feels like , If Only for a moment.Happy New Years Lydi have a great day :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

the very same to you, Vidya. Thank you for the review. Lydi**
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
wow. this one really struck a note with me. I wish I could be that person too. Not all the time, but every once in a while I open my eyes and I wish...
Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

Glad you understand....thanks so much, Tammy. Happy New Year to you. lydi**
Ahh yes, 'just sometimes', how apropos, have missed reading your amazing poetry my friend. Happy New Year Lydi! xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I am so "jazzed" to see you on the site again, Frieda. Happy New Year to you too....may it be a hea.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha, now that response made me smile, thought I'd take my head out of the sand for a bit, always a pl.. read more

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