interlude of fulfillment

friday night makes the sparks fly

“fuschia” by cate parr of silverridgestudio

Courtesy of etsy.com

your eyes speak a language
           in which my soul longs to be fluent
sweet nothings float through the air
harmonizing with a silent chorus of stars
                                    the sighs of night caress me
my heart beats to the rhythm of your kisses
                              yielding to the passion
hiding between tangles in silken sheets
we nibble on sizzling tidbits of desire
you are my outburst of simmering emotion
             in this interlude of fulfillment
                          truly a scene meant for only us
pour toujours mon amour

Author's Note

okay, i never really pay attention to the captcha, but this one has me laughing, "asshake" :)

Reviews

[Daffy]

The opening words are really brilliant. Everyone would agree, I am sure. Viz: 'your eyes speak a language, in which my soul longs to be fluent'. Anyone who has made gentle love, and looked into those eyes, knows exactly what this sentence means. How is it the eyes look so rapturous at that time....full of love and longing, and caring, and ...oh! I so wish they looked like that all of the time!

[Lydia Shutter]

Wouldn't that be nice? :) thanks so much for the review, Daffy. Lydi**

[redzone]

...."a silent chorus of stars / the sighs of night caress me..." took me away to the emotion weaving throughout your poem Lydi... it is a truely "nice" poem.. your poems always make my day more enjoyable... as for this captcha, the only way it makes any sense is if you were having some fish a*s.... er... for dinner, for dinner.... --redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here.....you do have a way with words, Curt. I am so pleased I can bring enjoyment with my words. You certainly bring me that with yours. Hope you are having a good weekend. Thanks for the "nice" review, Curt. Lydi**

[kublakhan27]

I love the juxtaposition of intensity and gentility, a facet of the greatest romances. Every line and image is sensuous and powerful, including the French conclusion. There is something about the French language and the way the words flow that just seems to lend itself to sensuality. Love this one :)

[Lydia Shutter]

I am honored to have a review from you. Thank you very much. Yes, French is certainly the language of love. No doubt of that. Lydi**

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure Lydi :)

[gabrielle]

your first-two lines are always captivating lydi. the softness and gentleness of your words adds more passion to this piece.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Gabrielle. Have a wonderful weekend. lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

Lydi... your art is delicately beautiful.
It seems to blend with passion hiding in
corners of tangled sheets. Tomorrow...
Sunday will bring north winds and cold
air will linger... but I will think of
your warm and sensual poem and
delight in the warmth of words.
truly... Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you for your review, Pat. Stay Warm! Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another lovely balanced and eloquent piece of romantic poetry. No need for the large print the words speak for themselves Lydi. And trust you to spot the captcha!

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you for your review, John. Have a great weekend. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

Asshake. LOL. What's an asshake. Sounds painful but the poem was beautiful. The double letters did not go unnoticed.

[Lydia Shutter]

:) thanks, Pryde. Lydi**

[icelandicblue]

This is truly hot off the press Lydi. The sizzle rests on an underlying sweetness and I thoroughly enjoyed this poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Blue. Enjoy the weekend. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

I love this sizzling little sensual Friday night gem Lydi! I can't think of a better way to spend the evening than reading your poetry to my sweetie (and nibbling on little tidbits of desire) You have definitely heated up a rainy California Friday night!
:) Julie
p.s. asshake - reminds me of the KC and the Sunshine Band song - Shake your bootie, shake your bootie....

[Lydia Shutter]

Exactly, Julie! That is the song I was thinking when I read it! LOL You read my poetry to your man? Now THAT is a compliment. Thank you so much, Julie. Have a great weekend. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

I do read it to him. My daughter reads your poetry as well. You have fans you don't even know about Lydi! (You really should do another book) :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Maybe someday, Julie. Thank you for being such a good friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem rocks with passion, lydi...

jacob

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Jacob. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Trace]

Fitting Captcha for the poem, no??? I love your Friday night delight poetry. I can't believe I am the first to read it and comment. I am off and trying to captcha ( LOL )up on my reading and writing.
This is soft, sensual, and sizzling with those little tidbits of passion that you fill your poetry with so wonderfully. Much enjoyed. Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Trace. Nice to see a review from you, my friend. Enjoy the weekend. Lydi**