Lapse

Even a ho-hum day can inspire!

Artwork by Jessica Durant “Black and Blue for You”

courtesy of etsy.com

My last breath of sleep

morphs into a sluggish morning

then climbs a mountain of responsibility

ever defying gravity

my personal velocity is set at less than brisk

and my alacrity seems to be missing in action

prudently placed steps get me to where I need to be

           acting as an indentured servant

                   to this empty house

                          which is not a benevolent master

still, I serve my time willingly

     facing every banana peel slip up

          with a song and a smile

               confident it will soon lapse into a poem

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh I know the exact feeling of waking like this Lydi... our "dreamers-mind" is always there, even though we must do our responsibilities, and it ain't always easy, with souls who pick up so many things during their day ha! ;) But there comes always art out of each and every impression/impulse, so as your art, is the one of a true poetess.... thank you for sharing this one... magnificent!

- Elisa

[Lydia Shutter]

You and I are a little bit alike when it comes to our dreaming I think! Thank you once again. I am so grateful for all the wonderful reviews you have left this evening. Lydi**

The pleasure is all mine, when I have the time, I'm here... and love it! you're welcome always! x

[Neville]

Brilliant, so intelligently composed. With every word perfectly threaded. Who would dare not read each word once the first was read, no-one, I bet... I liked the picture too, N

[Lydia Shutter]

Running out of ways to thank you, Neville. Hope you are enjoying the day. Thanks. Lydi**

[Neville]

You don't have to thank me my Friend, it is a genuine pleasure to read your words... N

[PoetryPenPal]

Beautiful work Lydi. I just love the way you show your emotions.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you once again. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

The ho-hum of a blue day is a condition of which we are often a victim, but somehow we forge on, wipe up the mess from the banana peel slip, and forge on for that bit of sunshine that awaits us to discover -the iron of will is victorious in a world that is too often "Hell-bent" on doing us in!! I suppose I refer to these black and blue days as the bruises of a life that is "lived", and not hidden from!

I like your words of survival!! And oh how perfect is the image - the face somewhat elusive, not wanting to become lost in the pain of life, but rather dipping in and out of it in shades of black and blue with a large space of area left undiscovered!

[Lydia Shutter]

I always appreciate your in depth reviews...and your notice of the artwork. Thank you, Sheila. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

With every day comes responsibility and we thrive because of this.Your poetry is lovely

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you so much for your review. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome dear poet

[Dhaye]

Each day is gift for everyone. A chance to do the things need to be done. A chance to make choices for life. Responsibilities are never ending. Sometimes we just have to face the reality that we have to wake up to test our perseverance in some aspects of life. LOL.

Nice result. This is a well-done craft for the day, Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. I always appreciate your kind words. Lydi**

[ron]

I think your poem did lapse in to a poem. Love the abstract painting in this one to.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Ron. Lydi***

[ron]

You are most welcome Lydi

[Sanober]

gosh Lydi... those opening lines are so amazing, capturing the morning of a long day with perfection"climbs a mountain of responsibility ever defying gravity". WOW! I love it when you talk of poetry within your poetry...for it truly speaks to me like a good old friend. we poets are so lucky, we know we'll always have a place to lay our feelings down...no matter what. another stunningly eloquent poem, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it, Sanober. Poetry is our vehicle of choice. Thank you so much for the review. Have a wonderful weekend. Lydi**

[Tom]

Like a cool misty morning until the sunshine eventually breaks through, revealing a beautiful day !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Tom. Lydi**

[Rick Puetter]

Yes, we sometimes stumble into the morning, stumble into life not quite ready. Still have to move forward. Got to do it. Maybe we'll get to rest later and rest. And when has life been benevolent. This is something the Universe doesn't know. I wish it did, but those are the wishes and beliefs of perhaps the young which have not been hardened by reality.

"Oh Thou, who didst with Pitfall and with gin
Beset the Road I was to wander in,
Thou will not with Predestin'd Evil round
Enmesh me, and impute my Fall to Sin?"

-- Omar Khayyam

Yes, there are obstacles in life. Make no mistake. Hoping yours will be small today and stay small into the foreseeable future.

Best regards,

Rick

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for your thoughts, Rick. That Omar Khayyam quote is wonderful. I appreciate you stopping by. Lydi**