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Oh I know the exact feeling of waking like this Lydi... our "dreamers-mind" is always there, even though we must do our responsibilities, and it ain't always easy, with souls who pick up so many things during their day ha! ;) But there comes always art out of each and every impression/impulse, so as your art, is the one of a true poetess.... thank you for sharing this one... magnificent!
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
You and I are a little bit alike when it comes to our dreaming I think! Thank you once again. I am.. read moreYou and I are a little bit alike when it comes to our dreaming I think! Thank you once again. I am so grateful for all the wonderful reviews you have left this evening. Lydi**
10 Years Ago
The pleasure is all mine, when I have the time, I'm here... and love it! you're welcome always! x
Brilliant, so intelligently composed. With every word perfectly threaded. Who would dare not read each word once the first was read, no-one, I bet... I liked the picture too, N
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10 Years Ago
Running out of ways to thank you, Neville. Hope you are enjoying the day. Thanks. Lydi**
10 Years Ago
You don't have to thank me my Friend, it is a genuine pleasure to read your words... N
Beautiful work Lydi. I just love the way you show your emotions.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you once again. Lydi**
Oh I know the exact feeling of waking like this Lydi... our "dreamers-mind" is always there, even though we must do our responsibilities, and it ain't always easy, with souls who pick up so many things during their day ha! ;) But there comes always art out of each and every impression/impulse, so as your art, is the one of a true poetess.... thank you for sharing this one... magnificent!
- Elisa
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You and I are a little bit alike when it comes to our dreaming I think! Thank you once again. I am.. read moreYou and I are a little bit alike when it comes to our dreaming I think! Thank you once again. I am so grateful for all the wonderful reviews you have left this evening. Lydi**
10 Years Ago
The pleasure is all mine, when I have the time, I'm here... and love it! you're welcome always! x
The ho-hum of a blue day is a condition of which we are often a victim, but somehow we forge on, wipe up the mess from the banana peel slip, and forge on for that bit of sunshine that awaits us to discover -the iron of will is victorious in a world that is too often "Hell-bent" on doing us in!! I suppose I refer to these black and blue days as the bruises of a life that is "lived", and not hidden from!
I like your words of survival!! And oh how perfect is the image - the face somewhat elusive, not wanting to become lost in the pain of life, but rather dipping in and out of it in shades of black and blue with a large space of area left undiscovered!
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10 Years Ago
I always appreciate your in depth reviews...and your notice of the artwork. Thank you, Sheila. Lyd.. read moreI always appreciate your in depth reviews...and your notice of the artwork. Thank you, Sheila. Lydi**
Each day is gift for everyone. A chance to do the things need to be done. A chance to make choices for life. Responsibilities are never ending. Sometimes we just have to face the reality that we have to wake up to test our perseverance in some aspects of life. LOL.
Nice result. This is a well-done craft for the day, Lydi.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you very much. I always appreciate your kind words. Lydi**
gosh Lydi... those opening lines are so amazing, capturing the morning of a long day with perfection"climbs a mountain of responsibility ever defying gravity". WOW! I love it when you talk of poetry within your poetry...for it truly speaks to me like a good old friend. we poets are so lucky, we know we'll always have a place to lay our feelings down...no matter what. another stunningly eloquent poem, my friend.
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10 Years Ago
You know it, Sanober. Poetry is our vehicle of choice. Thank you so much for the review. Have a w.. read moreYou know it, Sanober. Poetry is our vehicle of choice. Thank you so much for the review. Have a wonderful weekend. Lydi**
Yes, we sometimes stumble into the morning, stumble into life not quite ready. Still have to move forward. Got to do it. Maybe we'll get to rest later and rest. And when has life been benevolent. This is something the Universe doesn't know. I wish it did, but those are the wishes and beliefs of perhaps the young which have not been hardened by reality.
"Oh Thou, who didst with Pitfall and with gin
Beset the Road I was to wander in,
Thou will not with Predestin'd Evil round
Enmesh me, and impute my Fall to Sin?"
-- Omar Khayyam
Yes, there are obstacles in life. Make no mistake. Hoping yours will be small today and stay small into the foreseeable future.
Best regards,
Rick
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for your thoughts, Rick. That Omar Khayyam quote is wonderful. I appreciate you stopping.. read moreThank you for your thoughts, Rick. That Omar Khayyam quote is wonderful. I appreciate you stopping by. Lydi**