salty winds of change

salty winds of change

A Poem by Lydia Shutter



“An Aspiring Actress Arrives In Hollywood” by Janet Hill

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i tasted the salty winds of change

while leaning on the lamp post of desire

my past and present roads

                     intersected sensually

unspent fantasies jingled in my pockets

stars chattered about it all

till the sun awakened with a smile

all because

          you tied a sensual melody

                  around my dreams

© 2013 Lydia Shutter


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This would appear to be one of those romantic pieces you were telling me about ;) I do sense a dark metaphor at work here, but the lyrical sway of your images and observations compel me to consider it a love story. Yet it can still be read and interpreted in any number of ways. And like many below, I thought the unspent fantasies was a killer image and a sort of thesis statement for all that follows. Wonderful work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Indeed, Kubla, this is one of the romantic writes I spoke of. There is always more than what first .. read more
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Always a pleasure my friend :)



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As that wonderful painting of an aspiring actress arriving in Hollywood , you are with beautiful poetry to this site with excellent imagery. I like the idea of the sun awakened with a smile. We are awakened too ...:).............

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Sami. Lydi**
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................
Beautiful and sensual the possibility that love will make us grow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Lydi**
beautifully written piece...short and sweet...with that sensual touch so subtle..the way you do it..

like the intersecting, the lamp post leaning...

reminded me of an old Herman's Hermits song---

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


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jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

yes, they are..and i once saw them, the original hermits without peter noone..and they called themse.. read more
Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

A lot of the groups out there have only one of the original "players" in them, but they have the rig.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

Amen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved your this beautiful poem ... lovely pic. and the composition of words's great. Your this poem touched my heart. Very lovely poem. I loved the scent .. the smoothness of your wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review. Lydi**

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Added on November 17, 2013
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