This would appear to be one of those romantic pieces you were telling me about ;) I do sense a dark metaphor at work here, but the lyrical sway of your images and observations compel me to consider it a love story. Yet it can still be read and interpreted in any number of ways. And like many below, I thought the unspent fantasies was a killer image and a sort of thesis statement for all that follows. Wonderful work :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Indeed, Kubla, this is one of the romantic writes I spoke of. There is always more than what first .. read moreIndeed, Kubla, this is one of the romantic writes I spoke of. There is always more than what first meets the eye in my writing....and you are a wise reader to spot that. Thank you so much for the review. Lydi**
unspent fantasies jingled in my pockets
stars chattered about it all
till the sun awakened with a smile
You never cease to amaze me my friend. Stunning in every single way!
Hugs, Julie
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Julie. Enjoy the rest of your day. Lydi**
Wonderful Lydi** to connect with someone through your dreams, is divine... your poem whispers soften... of that exact feeling... I always enjoy your work with whole my heart, thank you! knuffels en dikke kus!
- Elisa
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Elisa. I appreciate the wonderful review. Lydi**
Extremely beautiful my friend. I have leaned against that lamp post too, except the bulb was burned out. This was soft and touching and wonderful as I always seem to find in your work.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Jack. Have a great day. Lydi**
The essence for excitement and passion are all there contained within your creative words !
A splendid read Lydia !
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11 Years Ago
Thanks so much, Tom. You finally have a real photo....great! Lydi**
11 Years Ago
Yes indeed Lydia, I'm a shy boy !
11 Years Ago
Time to get over it. Let me be the one to tell you that the meek do NOT inherit the earth and the m.. read moreTime to get over it. Let me be the one to tell you that the meek do NOT inherit the earth and the moon is not made of green cheese. LOL