to the sun

too many rainy days here lately

photo courtesy of favim.com

my hand reaches out
beyond the safety of my trusty umbrella
to cup raindrops
the rain will not bother me
not today
     raindrops plip
                  then plop   

playing my unfinished symphony

as i conduct

muddy puddles become my dance floor

because these old lady feet

are on the winding path to the sun

Reviews

[Sanober]

"because these old lady feet
are on the winding path to the sun"..
there is such rhythm, music and magic in those lines. the images, as always...come at me like High definition 3D effects. Love the atmosphere of the rain...but even more...your feet dancing to the promise of the sun. so lovely, Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you once again, Sanober. I really appreciate all the wonderful things you say. Lydi**

[Dr. Wood ?]

a bit like the yellow brick road Lydi.......Keep on it.....that rain can't last forever

[Lydia Shutter]

Absolutely true, my friend. Thanks for stopping by. Lydi**

[redzone]

Lydi, love the rainy day images... mud puddles,"plip plop", conducting wet symphonies.... looking for the sun... I'll catch up lydi, but I am still playing in the puddles, splashing being 6 again... fun!!!! hope you can tell than not only is this a"nice" poem,I am entangled in its fantasy. ---red(splashing away)zone

[Lydia Shutter]

Keep playing in the puddles, Curt...but make sure you take off your shoes before you track all that mud into the kitchen! :) Thanks for the "nice" comment.....entanglements can be delightful! Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...it's like being in a bit of a depressed state of mind, then seeing a break in the clouds...knowing the rain of pain is about to ebb, and life is to get sunny again.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Jacob! Lydi**

[Latifa]

consistant from start to end darling great one

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Latifa. Lydi**

[Neon]

Nice poem, Lydia. An excellent newie poem written by you from yer heart. I want this poem in my library so, am gonna put it into. Lovable words you dropped in. In the rainy season every beauty walks in the same way holding slipery's in/on hands and walking barefoot like a deer on the road, the winds blow their hair and when the hair cover the faces of Angels... omg, everybody goes fall down on the ground to see such a stunning looks... lol Well penned.

And, by the way... the pic.'s again damn sizzling.. OMG, her walking's ripping my heart off ... lol

[Lydia Shutter]

I get such a kick out of your comments. Thank you very much, Neon. Have a great day. lydi**

[Neon]

what????????

[Lydia Shutter]

I get a kick out of them....they make me smile....they make me happy.

[Neon]

Oh .. lol i got it now :) Thanks, Lydia for smiling by mah reviews and of course thanks for being kicked outta my comments .. lol but i think it's you who kicked me outta your beautiful pics. :)