just thinking about my cousin today...i miss you ronny
photo courtesy of www.walls360.com
it’s
a nameless street
looks very much like others i’ve traveled
flowers bordering it may have names
but i never learned them
because you knew them and could recite them easily
a street that has lasted
through named hurricanes
and being pummeled
by anonymous hailstones
a street that tempts me
with imagery waiting to be written
because it is the street
that always brings me back
to the memory of you
dear Lydi... I am reminded of the song
from My Fair Lady, entitled "On the street
where you live". My cousin David and his
sister Linda and I shared our childhood.
Now, they are both laid to rest in the
poetic cornfields where we played
and dreamed of our future families.
Your poem has crossed my heart in
familiar ways. truly... Pat
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Glad you could identify, my friend. My cousin and I were so close. I miss him very much...more som.. read moreGlad you could identify, my friend. My cousin and I were so close. I miss him very much...more some days than others. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
Memories, without them where would we be? Lydi my sweet friend, you have touched my heart with this wonderful piece. I can feel the longing and the love so very deeply. You are amazing my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Awww, Jack, thank you so much. My cousin was more like a brother to me and I miss him every day. Y.. read moreAwww, Jack, thank you so much. My cousin was more like a brother to me and I miss him every day. Your compassionate review touches me. I appreciate it so much. Lydi**
Lydi...what a special write. I love how a single place, object, word, or color can preserve and evoke memories from a lifetime ago. Cousins add their own unique brand of fun and spice to our lives. This is such a heartfelt and beautiful write for your cousin Ronnie....God bless him always. Wonderful poem, my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Your warm review is such a pleasure to read, my sweet friend. Thank you very much, Sanober. Hope a.. read moreYour warm review is such a pleasure to read, my sweet friend. Thank you very much, Sanober. Hope all is well with you. Lydi**
I like the photo. Gave life to your words. It is amazing how places can take us to old and missed places. I like the description of the street that survived the hurricanes and left us with good memories. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I appreciate the time you took to read my words and leave your thoughts, Coyote. Thank you. Lydi**
We are overwhelmed at times with feelings of melancholy when we think back to the days when someone as dear as this comes back in memory to us, and we are for a few moments, or more whisked back to the "then". It may be a street where we traveled with them on a nameless street, or of other fond times, but they all hold the same memory of endearment!
I am sorry you have lost this person!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you, Sheila. My cousin and I were like brother and sister. I feel his loss every day. I app.. read moreThank you, Sheila. My cousin and I were like brother and sister. I feel his loss every day. I appreciate your compassion and your lovely review. Lydi**
It is funny how a certain place, or an object can remind us so much of a person and bring back such precious memories. I'm sure the street is lovely...as is your poem Lydi. A beautiful tribute to someone very special.
:) Julie
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Julie. I appreciate the time you took to read my words and leave such a warm rev.. read moreThank you so much, Julie. I appreciate the time you took to read my words and leave such a warm review. lydi**