delicious history

artwork by krystal campbell “dragonfly” courtesy of krystal studio etsy.com

uphill rhymes of life were easier to navigate that day

the smooth shadows of desire hid in every corner of the room

your voice was an elixir for what ailed me

oui, mon amour, tu es charmante

soft flashes of arousal danced in your eyes

and when the moon came out to play

i felt certain years from now

the rest would be delicious history

Author's Note

oui, mon amour, tu es charmante = yes, my love, you are charming

Reviews

[Baban.A.A]

very emotional, I could certainly feel the aroha, and passion flowing around. titling this piece the delicious history first made me to reread the poem to get the essence of delicious history and now I can sense how delicious that history can be. a great piece and best luck.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for reading and your review. Have a good day. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Everything about this sweet love poem is charming. You have an elegant style that I admire so much Lydi. This is lovely!

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review, Julie. Hope you are having a great Monday. lydi**

[OTownPete]

Your words have created quite a warming scenrario Frieda. Your friend in words, Pete

[Lydia Shutter]

Well, it's nice you think they are warm, but this is Lydia, not Frieda!

[Pryde Foltz]

Nice mouthful..amuse bouche, non. Is your partner french? I noticed you use quite a bit in your poems.

[Lydia Shutter]

No, but he does speak French and so do I. I just think Francais est si romantique! Thank you very much, Pryde. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

Oui, je pense ça, aussi.

[Lydia Shutter]

C'est magnifique mon amie!

[Joyce S. Greene]

As the French say, ooh la, la! Quite a night ahead for you, Lydi. Have fun! Delicious poetry.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Joyce. Lydi**

[wordman]

lydi it all is great the poem the graphics I believe I heard a little French music

[Lydia Shutter]

I added no music, but there were French words....power of suggestion I suppose! :) thanks, Ron. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

Oh this is magical, I felt the tension and anticipation, and also the knowing, it was a night that would be remembered...oooh la la, magnifique Madame Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Merci beaucoup, mon amie! I hope you are feeling better. Have a good evening. Lydi**

[Sheila Kline]

And yes, she is charming as you are my friend! I do not know French so when you use it in your poetry, I am absolutely swept away in the sound and meaning of it! Your words flow with a delicious present and that which shall be a delicious history! It makes me think of the phrase, "Those were the good old days"!
Beautiful Lydi!!

[Lydia Shutter]

Ah yes, they were! I do love the French language and while I am far from fluent in it, some things just sound better in Francais! Thank you so much for your review, Sheila. Have a good evening. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem and artwork. Delicious history is something to live for. Amazing use of language and tale my friend. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Coyote. Enjoy the evening. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And a charming poem with such deep and sensual love within.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, John. Lydi**

[Dhaye]

I'm on a diet today
and whatever delicious food offered to me,
I won't taste it anyway
"Cause I'm on a diet today!


Sometimes someone charming comes along, dancing before your eyes... motivating...arousing...tempting. Once in a while, you're glancing...but fighting against the temptation. You just have to tell, "This won't take long. Tomorrow, this will be just one of those delicious memories".

Nice one, Lyd** Brilliant!

[Lydia Shutter]

Your words made me smile.....no matter if one is on a diet, romance is always hungry in the soul. Thank you so much for your lovely review. Lydi**

[Dhaye]

"no matter if one is on a diet, romance is always hungry in the soul." Nice thought to ponder.
read more"no matter if one is on a diet, romance is always hungry in the soul." Nice thought to ponder.
You're welcome, Lyd.