he can

“heaven’s embrace” by lauri blank

he can find my lips in the dark
but prefers them in the light
realize the passion
only unearthed in dreams
leave fingerprints of lust
on forgotten walls of me
feed me tastes of both childhood
and ambrosial maturity
make me feel like
i’m made of pluperfect porcelain
while admiring my flaws
join me for a swim in midnight’s ocean
splashing stars on my skin
quite simply …..he can love me

Reviews

[Lilly]

Beautiful, passionate and dream-like!

"he can find my lips in the dark
but prefers them in the light"

"join me for a swim in midnight’s ocean
splashing stars on my skin"

I really enjoyed the whole piece but especially loved those lines.
Really lovely poem

[Lydia Shutter]

thanks, Lilly. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Lilly]

you're welcome :)

[Jack...]

Beautiful Lydi, this is beautiful, Lydi. I read Trace's review below and I know the answer to his question, it is definitely the him in this poem, for he has you. Gorgeous my friend, simply gorgeous.

[Lydia Shutter]

((((Jack)))) thank you so much. You really made my day....and I am showing my hubby your comment! Lydi**

[Jack...]

Perfect...but I'm sure he already knows he is the lucky one. :)

[Trace]

from this write, I am not sure who is the luckiest, you, he, or the readers of this wonderful poem.
Simply lovely. Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Trace, you flatter me....and I appreciate it. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Oh Lydi....One word...Stunning!

I'm keeping this one to read again and again!

Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Julie. It's one I posted a while ago....and your reaction was the same back then! :) Have a wonderful day. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

I thought it was familiar. Really Lydi - a gorgeous poem!

[Frieda P]

Holy Lydi, this is impressive and genuine love, one question, does he have a brother? :-) Love this, going right into my favorites toot sweet....really luverly.

[Lydia Shutter]

If he did, I would send him your way, Frieda! :) thank you for the lovely comments. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

You're too sweet Lydi, sending you a squishy hug for that. :-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Back at ya, my friend....off to walk now.

[Rita L. Sev]

Real romance woven in these words, Lydi - not flowers and rainbows, but the stuff of love that touches body and soul... Well crafted!

[Lydia Shutter]

Romance and love poems will always be my favorite genre....but not the stuff found in Valentine's Day cards....to that I would have to be the Scrooge in your Halloween poem and say, "Bah humbug!" :) Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Rita L. Sev]

More like "Bah, Lovebug!" LOL! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

very clever! :)

[DrD]

Okay, I'm impressed. What an excellent job of word crafting. Truly a marvelous piece of writing.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much! Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A deeply meaningful, romantic and intelligent poem Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Quite the compliment. Thank you. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

With words and passions like this he has to love you the love of childhood and maturity...Bravo

[Lydia Shutter]

:) Indeed, my friend. Thank you so much for your review. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)