he can

“heaven’s embrace” by lauri blank

he can find my lips in the dark
but prefers them in the light
realize the passion
only unearthed in dreams
leave fingerprints of lust
on forgotten walls of me
feed me tastes of both childhood
and ambrosial maturity
make me feel like
i’m made of pluperfect porcelain
while admiring my flaws
join me for a swim in midnight’s ocean
splashing stars on my skin
quite simply …..he can love me

Reviews

[Lilly]

Beautiful, passionate and dream-like!

"he can find my lips in the dark
but prefers them in the light"

"join me for a swim in midnight’s ocean
splashing stars on my skin"

I really enjoyed the whole piece but especially loved those lines.
Really lovely poem

[Lydia Shutter]

thanks, Lilly. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Lilly]

you're welcome :)

[Diana]

An eloquent testimony to the need for love at all stages of life. The best power we as people have, love... "Quite simply...he can love me." Simply put, this is simply splendid, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

How sweet of you, Diana. Thank you very much. Lydi**

[wordman]

loved this sensual passionate write lydi and the graphics just blended in as well

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Ron. Lydi**

[Tom]

You have encompassed and captured the characteristics of love in all its resplendent glory!

The depth and feeling are inspiring throughout every line !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Tom. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[David Scott]

Now this is a love poem to gift the ego of a man to heights of eagles.
The picture is lovely as well.

[Lydia Shutter]

David, thank you for taking the time to review so many of my poems today. I apprecaite it. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Oh, nice!! Dream like but seductive in understanding....accepting all there is and being happy to bathe in light and dark...gorgeous, a fav! x

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you. Lydi**

[Sanober]

Oh my...This is an extraordinary poem of love and all its wonders...a tribute to a special man who makes everything worthwhile. i cannot even pick a favorite line. You are such a delight to read, my friend.

[Lydia Shutter]

And you are a delight to leave me such reviews. Thank you once again, my friend. LydI**

[SyberRose]

join me for a swim in midnight’s ocean
splashing stars on my skin
quite simply …..he can love me

Lovely as always Lydi...and I always love when i come across a word I have to look up...pluperfect...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

And I love it when I can teach a word to my friends. Thanks, Rose. I appreciate the review. Have a great day. lydi**

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Ahhh!!! Passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today.Thanks for the visit to my page, for taking time to read and comment on my work.Sara

[Lydia Shutter]

Glad you enjoyed. Thank you for stopping by. Lydi**

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

You are quite welcome..Sara

[Tom C]

He can find my lips in the dark
but prefers them in the light

Awesome. How clear I can see that.
Your ability to allow me to see the passion and love is just wonderful. Thank you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much for your review. Lydi**