we learned with each wrinkle
acquired skills with each silver hair
sharing golden secrets through the years
either whispered
or with a
smile
across a
crowded room
quite satisfying
yet we always knew try as we might to stop it
time would pass
and eventually
we would reap what we sowed
still we smile
knowing somehow
our little girl dreams
will continue to prevail
oh... what an incredibly wonderful poem you wrote so beautifully my friend:)
i loved everything in this write...and yes i completely agree with you dear, friends completely are the ones who just understand us, without any explanations:)
they are like the salt and sugar of our life...they are the ones who actually sometimes create spark to our life:)
one of those really precious jewels we always need to treasure:)
a lovely read and write absolutely:)
well done:)
happy writing
saumya:)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Saumya. Friends are the jewels in the crown of life...and we must always appreci.. read moreThank you so much, Saumya. Friends are the jewels in the crown of life...and we must always appreciate them. Lydi**
oh... what an incredibly wonderful poem you wrote so beautifully my friend:)
i loved everything in this write...and yes i completely agree with you dear, friends completely are the ones who just understand us, without any explanations:)
they are like the salt and sugar of our life...they are the ones who actually sometimes create spark to our life:)
one of those really precious jewels we always need to treasure:)
a lovely read and write absolutely:)
well done:)
happy writing
saumya:)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Saumya. Friends are the jewels in the crown of life...and we must always appreci.. read moreThank you so much, Saumya. Friends are the jewels in the crown of life...and we must always appreciate them. Lydi**
So tenderly expressed...friends are so important...to travel life with them...and share...remember...smile at each corner walked around...together...this is lovely xx
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Friends are more important as we grow older...the ones who share our history and truly know us make .. read moreFriends are more important as we grow older...the ones who share our history and truly know us make life so much sweeter. Thanks again. Lydi**
this sounds a little suspicious, bordering cunning movements
well planned just like a woman. I loved it
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11 Years Ago
Nothing sinister in my ink....but it's all in what the reader brings to the party. Thanks for the r.. read moreNothing sinister in my ink....but it's all in what the reader brings to the party. Thanks for the review, Ron. Lydi**
A very positive and emotional poem. What a moving tribute poem to a real friend in life. I sure enjoyed this poem. A true best friend is something most wonderful!!!!
What a lovely write to honor a friendship. Nothing beats having that kind of bond, to be able to share secrets and stories, good and bad and have someone to entrust them with. Very sweet read Lydi.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Dye. I appreciate the review. Lydi**
How beautiful and what a wonderful tribute to someone who is so close to you Lydia. Such a friendship is to be truly treasured, as you do.
Thank you for a glimpse into your life(skeletons or not!)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much for your lovely review. Lydi**