the words like threads
help me sew a tapestry of the day
silken linguistics slip through
the needle of miscellany
a frivolous bagatelle soon takes form so regal
an accouterment to drape over
my chair of ennui
on an oh-so- mundane monday
"Poetry translates the mundane into the magical." quote from L. Shutter ;0) and I think this is all that really needs to be said about this very "nice" and UN-mundane Monday poem... Lydi, I think you are one of the very few who could write such a wonderful line as : "silken linguistics slip through
the needle of miscellany" and with this, each and every day becomes alive with art and the desire to create.... it is always so wonderful to read your creations... be well Lydi, ~~redzone
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11 Years Ago
Curt, your reviews honor me in a way that makes my day. Thank you so much. Lydi**
While reading, I realize there is a mystery that needs to reveal in this poem.. And I hope, I will find it out :D anyway, Keep it up. I like it
- Kuhr Gred
It's wonderful that writing can make the day so much better!! Your words are so beautiful for such a poem about Monday!! They work so well, because you have made Monday into something beautiful with your words.
Gorgeous!
"Poetry translates the mundane into the magical." quote from L. Shutter ;0) and I think this is all that really needs to be said about this very "nice" and UN-mundane Monday poem... Lydi, I think you are one of the very few who could write such a wonderful line as : "silken linguistics slip through
the needle of miscellany" and with this, each and every day becomes alive with art and the desire to create.... it is always so wonderful to read your creations... be well Lydi, ~~redzone
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Curt, your reviews honor me in a way that makes my day. Thank you so much. Lydi**
We all have such days, and even with a wealth of different interests, ennui can cast its languid spell over each and all of us! This poem has a playful feel to it, to my mind. Skilfully constructed, with a message we can all relate to. Even in the midst of ennui we can put pen to paper, in a creative way! Nicely penned, Lydi! ~ Robert.
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11 Years Ago
That's right, Robert....writing makes the day worthwhile no matter what is happening if you ask me. .. read moreThat's right, Robert....writing makes the day worthwhile no matter what is happening if you ask me. Thank you for this wonderful review. Have a good evening. Lydi**
Your tapestry and writings are awesome...Lovely as ever...:)
I also love the paintings you pic...:)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Sami! I appreciate the fact you notice the artwork too because I take a lot of t.. read moreThank you so much, Sami! I appreciate the fact you notice the artwork too because I take a lot of time choosing the graphics I use. Have a wonderful afternoon. lydi**
god, this is beautiful...and Monday will never be the same....okay so spanky and our gang used Sunday....but it fits with this poem..love the word, "ennui"---
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11 Years Ago
Now, of course, that song will be in my brain all day. :) Thanks for the great review Jacob. Lydi*.. read moreNow, of course, that song will be in my brain all day. :) Thanks for the great review Jacob. Lydi**
Your contemplations seem anything but mundane fine lady, or maybe because I'm reading this on a Tuesday, nope, they always are! Your pen has a flair of elegance, it probably drinks tea with pinky's up..ha, love it Lydia!
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11 Years Ago
But of course my words sit like little ladies at the table and keep their pinkies up! You are very .. read moreBut of course my words sit like little ladies at the table and keep their pinkies up! You are very funny, Frieda. Thanks for the wonderful review. lydi**
11 Years Ago
Ha you know we don't want to get those frown lines Lydi, my pleasure always.
How ironic that this is the furthest thing from mundane. You choose your words so eloquently and they came to life and danced on the page for me. I also learnt a new word today…I had to look up “ennui”. Beautiful poem Lydi…I enjoyed it deeply!!
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I am thrilled when I can send someone to the dictionary...thank you for telling me, Mia. I apprecia.. read moreI am thrilled when I can send someone to the dictionary...thank you for telling me, Mia. I appreciate your review. Have a great day. Lydi**