the words like threads
help me sew a tapestry of the day
silken linguistics slip through
the needle of miscellany
a frivolous bagatelle soon takes form so regal
an accouterment to drape over
my chair of ennui
on an oh-so- mundane monday
"Poetry translates the mundane into the magical." quote from L. Shutter ;0) and I think this is all that really needs to be said about this very "nice" and UN-mundane Monday poem... Lydi, I think you are one of the very few who could write such a wonderful line as : "silken linguistics slip through
the needle of miscellany" and with this, each and every day becomes alive with art and the desire to create.... it is always so wonderful to read your creations... be well Lydi, ~~redzone
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11 Years Ago
Curt, your reviews honor me in a way that makes my day. Thank you so much. Lydi**
Its very nice Ms Lydi** .Redzone was right . I have to get my webster dictionary for that . Powerful and enigmatic ! I love the painting or portrait as well .
What a lovely lap shawl you have sewn together to warm our hearts, Lydi. You have brightened up a "mundane Monday," or, as it is for me tonight, "a mundane Thursday" with your uniquely eloquent words.
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11 Years Ago
thank you very much, Joyce. I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**
I wish I had read this on Monday - I'm certain my Monday would not have been mundane...Your poetry always transports me to somewhere I would rather be than stuck at a desk behind a computer....
Hugs, Julie
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11 Years Ago
Take the magic carpet ride of words whenever the day gets too crazy, Julie! :) thanks for the revie.. read moreTake the magic carpet ride of words whenever the day gets too crazy, Julie! :) thanks for the review. Lydi**
Regal, Shivers Regal
Chivas Chivalry
Threaded thimbles draw attention to the accouterments
And the Drape of the tapestry is far short of mundane this Monday
Silken thoughts settle on your words.
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11 Years Ago
Guess you have potent potables on the mind. Another interesting review. Thanks. Lydi*
With poetry like yours...there can never be a mundane Monday! This poem holds so true for all us poets... a poem can take the monotony out of a Monday like no other. For me, it totally makes the day worth living. Your poetry speaks directly to my heart, my friend. Loved this one!
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11 Years Ago
I'm so pleased you understood the meaning. Poetry changes everything. Thanks, Sanober. Lydi**
Skillfully woven words Lydi...how can we have boring days when we are weaving our poems
with hues of wonder...and being able to share them with the world...Rose
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Rose. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
You make Monday seem so bright... so brilliant.. in glimpses and wonder, threaded together into perfection. Finding that no day is too mundane when one has poets like you speaking such beauty over them. :)
Everytime I view Monday as another calamitous start to the working week, I'll reflect on the eloquent words of your poem Lydi and remind myself that it is a day rich in detail, just as every day is and truly blessed we are to be able to enjoy each one!
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11 Years Ago
Every day has little details we tend to overlook. Paying attention to them makes like much more int.. read moreEvery day has little details we tend to overlook. Paying attention to them makes like much more interesting...and is a great inspiration for poetry! Thanks, Tom. Lydi**
11 Years Ago
The words of a great philosopher and poetess and I concur wholeheartedly !