i shall return

i shall return

A Poem by Lydia Shutter

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the night wears a negligee of silk
draped over her curves
her radiant stars twinkling
in all the right places
certainly you are drawn to her
she reaches out to you
through crevices of desire
spreading her luxuriant sensuality
into your most secret dreams
she cradles a special message
bathe in her glistening essence
feed on her words
for i am the one who sent her 
                      je renverrai mon amour

© 2013 Lydia Shutter


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This poem is packed with your usual flowing coaxing allure (with word choices I admire) . . . and then the last 4 lines send me on a different tangent . . . especially your last line, it piques such a plethora of ideas tumbling forth! Hope you're enjoying the autumn vibes! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Oh, Margie, this one is five years old! I wrote it in summer and really anytime is right for a roma.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

I love it when an old one is stirred into the newsfeed mix! *smile*
Lydia Shutter

6 Years Ago

Me too! It makes the words brand new again.




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There is a certain sense of sublime beauty mixed with delicate texture in this one. The imagery is good, and even though there isn't a ton of it, what you do have is quite dramatic. I especially enjoyed the ending...a nice touch. If only we could infuse ourselves into our lovers dreams with consistent purpose... Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

I appreciate your review, Sarah. Lydi**
If anything can ignite passion in the heat of an August night, it is the vocation of your words, Lydi!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by, Kelly. Lydi**
what a way to look at a night sky...what wonderful personification.

nicely done.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Jacob. Lydi**
Sensuality lingers in this write...down the lines...I wanted more...but left with my imagination to keep writing the verse... myself in my head...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

I try to leave a lot to the imagination when I write sensual poetry. That way the reader can paint .. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

You're welcome...I read so many...here...at times the themes get to be the same...and when you find .. read more
Magnifique, Madame Lydi...I love how you use the negligee...you always beat me to the words I want to use, at time...your sensual lines are always sizzling. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Ev. I appreciate your comments. Lydi**
Babe Roxx

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome, Lydi...the pleasure of reading your beautiful poetry is all mine. ;)
A very sexy write. The night is an alluring mistress.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Lydi*
I like the personification of the night..so sensual too. I like the idea of the night sending her love..
how many people have sat under the sky and made star-wishes? This is like those wishes coming to life..
well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Lydi**
What extravagant beauty in the personification of night... of the essence of love and sensuality moving through the soft, sweet darkness.. sending all your love... This makes the world seem so alive with bliss. Makes me wish that night would never end.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

It's the sort of night we all fantasize about! Thank you so much, Craig. Lydi**
An owl on the moon

11 Years Ago

Yes! A night that is brighter and warmer than any day... :)
Fabulous imagery, beautiful symbolic representation, and all so sensual....kudos!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments. Lydi**
A clear starry night is indeed a wondrous thing to behold and can evoke all kinds of passionate machinations !

An evocative and splendidly alluring read !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

11 Years Ago

What a lovely comment. Thank you so much. Lydi**

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