the night wears a negligee of silk draped over her curves her radiant
stars twinkling in all the right places certainly you are drawn to
her she reaches out to you through crevices of desire spreading her
luxuriant sensuality into your most secret dreams she cradles a special
message bathe in her glistening essence feed on her words for i am the
one who sent her je renverrai mon amour
This poem is packed with your usual flowing coaxing allure (with word choices I admire) . . . and then the last 4 lines send me on a different tangent . . . especially your last line, it piques such a plethora of ideas tumbling forth! Hope you're enjoying the autumn vibes! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Oh, Margie, this one is five years old! I wrote it in summer and really anytime is right for a roma.. read moreOh, Margie, this one is five years old! I wrote it in summer and really anytime is right for a romantic/sensual write if you ask me! :) Thanks so much for the visit and the review. Lydi**
6 Years Ago
I love it when an old one is stirred into the newsfeed mix! *smile*
There is a certain sense of sublime beauty mixed with delicate texture in this one. The imagery is good, and even though there isn't a ton of it, what you do have is quite dramatic. I especially enjoyed the ending...a nice touch. If only we could infuse ourselves into our lovers dreams with consistent purpose... Nicely written.
Sensuality lingers in this write...down the lines...I wanted more...but left with my imagination to keep writing the verse... myself in my head...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I try to leave a lot to the imagination when I write sensual poetry. That way the reader can paint .. read moreI try to leave a lot to the imagination when I write sensual poetry. That way the reader can paint a bit of the picture her/himself. Thanks for the comments. Lydi**
11 Years Ago
You're welcome...I read so many...here...at times the themes get to be the same...and when you find .. read moreYou're welcome...I read so many...here...at times the themes get to be the same...and when you find one with interest you want to keep reading...some I understand you want to just pass by...but give a reflective to the writer their presence is known...
Magnifique, Madame Lydi...I love how you use the negligee...you always beat me to the words I want to use, at time...your sensual lines are always sizzling. :)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Ev. I appreciate your comments. Lydi**
11 Years Ago
You are most welcome, Lydi...the pleasure of reading your beautiful poetry is all mine. ;)
I like the personification of the night..so sensual too. I like the idea of the night sending her love..
how many people have sat under the sky and made star-wishes? This is like those wishes coming to life..
well done.
What extravagant beauty in the personification of night... of the essence of love and sensuality moving through the soft, sweet darkness.. sending all your love... This makes the world seem so alive with bliss. Makes me wish that night would never end.
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11 Years Ago
It's the sort of night we all fantasize about! Thank you so much, Craig. Lydi**
11 Years Ago
Yes! A night that is brighter and warmer than any day... :)