i shall return

image courtesy of bibliopolis.com

 

the night wears a negligee of silk
draped over her curves
her radiant stars twinkling
in all the right places
certainly you are drawn to her
she reaches out to you
through crevices of desire
spreading her luxuriant sensuality
into your most secret dreams
she cradles a special message
bathe in her glistening essence
feed on her words
for i am the one who sent her 
                      je renverrai mon amour

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This poem is packed with your usual flowing coaxing allure (with word choices I admire) . . . and then the last 4 lines send me on a different tangent . . . especially your last line, it piques such a plethora of ideas tumbling forth! Hope you're enjoying the autumn vibes! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, Margie, this one is five years old! I wrote it in summer and really anytime is right for a romantic/sensual write if you ask me! :) Thanks so much for the visit and the review. Lydi**

[barleygirl]

I love it when an old one is stirred into the newsfeed mix! *smile*

[Lydia Shutter]

Me too! It makes the words brand new again.

[Ardra]

I thought lydi decided to be sweet and post more of her work heheh... wonderful one :)
Now a happy sat night

[Lydia Shutter]

This is an oldie, Ardra, but the words never expire! :) Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Neville]

Hey, I just checked and August 26th 2013 was not a Friday.. it was a Monday here in the UK... any chance of posting one of these every night Lydi**... bon apetit... Neville

[Lydia Shutter]

Wow, Neville, this was from five years ago...it was getting lonely without new comments and you made it brand new again. Thank you so much. I used to post one of these almost every day, Neville. Life gets in the way now. There are many of this genre on my pages though. Lydi**

[Neville]

I know.. I keep peeking when no one is looking.. I just dont wanna make anyone jealous, tis my guilty secret, or one of them and my sincere pleasure too Lydi**.... N

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL hell, if you feel guilty reading my words, how must I feel being the one who wrote the words? Neville, you always put a smile on my face. Thanks.

[Neville]

Sshhh, just dont tell the missus okay x

[Lydia Shutter]

If you don't tell my hubby! LOL

[Neville]

Deal............ x

[Me]

Gorgeous little piece Lydi...wonderfully sensual :) x

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Raven. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

What an exquisite opening line, you had me hooked Lydie! Love this, it so glistens on the page....

'je renverrai mon amour' translated as 'I would refer my love', not sure that's what you meant exactly but the intention came through with or without....

[Lydia Shutter]

Actually, it means, "I will send my love", Frieda...and that is what I meant to say. Thank you for your comments. Lydi**

[Frieda P]

I figured something like that, you can never trust the translation, love it all the same, my pleasure Lydi.

[Dara]

This sensual write makes me want to listen some Edith Piaf, one of my favorite French singers of all time. Your beautiful words bring out the French in all of us. Another keeper for me Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, yes, Edith Piaf was one of the great chanteuses! Merci beaucoup, mon ami! :) Lydi**

[TL Boehm]

feed on her words for I am the one who sent her. Exquisite this night personified.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much for your comments. Lydi**

[Lydia Shutter]

This one speaks to me as if you sended a hollywood star to someone, but one with Class, I imagine some older woman, who hit the charts in that time, like Brigitte Bordeaux, she came instantly up in my mind, it has a cool feeling of nostalgy here mixed with the romance you do always so well... and a bit of glammour... your roots I felt here... so loved it...

- Elisa

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh what a lovely comment you have left for me, my friend. Tthank you so much. Lydi**

The pleasure was all mine my sweet friend xxx

[mags]

What lovely images your beautiful words create. A fantastic write, as always. Margaret

[Lydia Shutter]

Always a pleasure to see your smiling face on my page, Margaret. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Joyce S. Greene]

A spectacular night indeed, Lydi. And yes, I and many ohers will keep returning to your page to read your very special poetry that sings of romance.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Joyce. You are a special lady. Lydi**