Your Kaleidoscope

 

 

"Big Hug Blonde" by Harry Weisburd

courtesy of yessy.com

 

 

 

 

 

You touch me
beckoning my inner child
enticing my soul

I trust you
allowing you to caress
my distant dreams

Taking a chance
weighing the odds

I dive in

The blurred borders
of my insight
are clarified
as your kaleidoscope
penetrates my sensibilities

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I really like what you have created with this one. You're first stanza is really inviting. You show us that this lover is tender; he can stimulate the deepest parts of your speaker with pure love channeled through touch.

That line about diving in is a wonderful transition that describes the communion that these two people share.

Also, I love the double entendre of the kaleidoscope is wonderful. It symbolizes the pinnacle of physical and spiritual love, the absolute transcendence of the two people. This was lovely Lydia.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for your in depth comment. I appreciate it. Lydi**

[Dara]

"The blurred borders of my insight", sounds like love to me, when our heart has our senses all in a tangle and then they become so clear when the love is true. Yes, this is a perfect poem for a Friday night.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Dara. Your comments mean a lot to me. Lydi**

[Joyce S. Greene]

A Friday night poem, Lydi! How wonderful to once again read your romantic words on the very best night of the week - made better, of course, by your poetry. Beautifully imagined and crafted. I salute you.

[Lydia Shutter]

It is a pleasure for me to write and post the "Friday night writes" again, Joyce. Thank you so much...not only for the comments, but for remembering! Lydi**

[h d e rushin]

"i dive in"

is the most uniformely, poetic love line ever written. it doesn't mean to wander through or stumble
around. it means to take me. absorbe me. suspend me in your trance..

well written,
dana

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely comment! thank you very much. Lydi**

[zainul]

What an innovative imagination!
Wonderful metaphor of kaleidoscope.
Thanks for sharing.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much for your comments. Lydi**

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)

[Stella Armour]

like this very much Lydia, especially the last 2 lines.. great penning...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Stella. Lydi*

[K. Louis]

Your language here is concise and purposeful. I loved the first two stanzas and the last. Well done.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much for your comments. Lydi**

[Aelita]

Absolutely gorgeous! Beautiful write, my dear friend :) ~Aelita~

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much. I hope you start posting here soon. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

One word : Awesome...:)...

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you so much, Sami. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)