Your Kaleidoscope

 

 

"Big Hug Blonde" by Harry Weisburd

courtesy of yessy.com

 

 

 

 

 

You touch me
beckoning my inner child
enticing my soul

I trust you
allowing you to caress
my distant dreams

Taking a chance
weighing the odds

I dive in

The blurred borders
of my insight
are clarified
as your kaleidoscope
penetrates my sensibilities

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I really like what you have created with this one. You're first stanza is really inviting. You show us that this lover is tender; he can stimulate the deepest parts of your speaker with pure love channeled through touch.

That line about diving in is a wonderful transition that describes the communion that these two people share.

Also, I love the double entendre of the kaleidoscope is wonderful. It symbolizes the pinnacle of physical and spiritual love, the absolute transcendence of the two people. This was lovely Lydia.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for your in depth comment. I appreciate it. Lydi**

[Neville]

Jumping Jupiter... I reckon Clockwork got it spot on.... Write on.. N

[Lydia Shutter]

:) Thanks once more. Lydi**

[Neville]

Night night my Friend, N

[Dean]

Lydia, you achieve such a beautiful synthesis of art and verse. I must tell you that I normally don't like the "enhancement" of poetry submissions by paintings, but yours are so appropriately delicate that I can actually profit from their commentary---as if they came together at the same time!

[Lydia Shutter]

If I accompany my words with a painting, it is because I feel it will add another layer to my words. Thank you for recognizing this. I appreciate the attention you are giving my words. Lydi**

[Everett DeValle]

Beautifully written...your poem flowed so well, Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Ev....new photo? Lydi*

[Everett DeValle]

You're welcome, Lydi...Yes. :)

[Anand Sehgal]

The blurred borders
of my insight
are clarified
as your kaleidoscope
penetrates my sensibilities - I am sinking into your expressions Lydi, great work. Higher degree of sensitivity and layered emotion portrayed.

[Lydia Shutter]

Anand, I appreciate your comments. thank you very much. Lydi**

[Hana Saemon]

Love this. reminds me of the feeling u get when you're falling in love. unsure of what's next but unable to resist.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your wonderful comments, Hana. lydi**

[Desert Knave]

This has tinges of both innocence and sensuality, surrender without submission. Melikes. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Life is never all black or white, is it? Shades of gray are present in every facet of our lives. Thanks, Jim. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

How I have missed your Friday night writes Lydi - love everything about this one! Hugs, Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

I'm thrilled to be posting them again, Julie. Thank you for your comments. Lydi**

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautifully written. Whether a budding romance or rekindling the flame,a timeless piece. Splendid read.

[Lydia Shutter]

thank you so much, Brandon. Lydi**

[angelina neves]

Uau! How delicious it is to read you again in you wonderful poems!
hugs flying from this side of the world

[Lydia Shutter]

What a pleasure to see comments from you again! Thank you so very much. Lydi**