Likes and dislikes

People can never fall weak except when they try by their ownself to do so ...

Lively truth but can be a myth
In the pages of the life
With the pace how fast the life can drive
And now need to found how can survive
Likes , dislikes = light , dark
Have gathered in mind a mark
As a beauty and a spark
Using now the zeal for moving deal
Key is vision,lock continue session
Hoping the life will be soon
Enlightened by the VICTORY'S NOON
I believe can never i be drawn
By the way that time instructed to now hide their last warn....

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

needs editing to smooth it out...but i like the use of in-line rhyme...
and the juxtapositions used in each line...the opposites..
j.

[Lyana]

I know the pace wasn't smooth. Writing is a way of talking to myself some times with rough rythem and sometimes with smooth one but i will consider it. Thank you...