Will You?

I was thinking about a poem like this and I felt like crying. Here it is...

Lie with me,

Cry with me,

Die with me,

Will you just be with me?

 

Can't you see, dear?,

You are mine,

And I am yours,

Will you believe me?

 

I know I am not skinny,

And I may be very shy,

But I love you so,

Will you love me too?

 

My heart was yours,

Since the minute I saw you,

And when you flashed your smile,

I was taken.

 

Will you date me?,

Will you marry me?,

Will you be the father of my children?,

Will you watch them grow with me?,

Will you die alongside me?,

Will we meet in Heaven?

 

I love you, baby,

Say you will too...

Reviews

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

This was beautiful :)

[Samuel Dickens]

I firmly believe that there is someone for everyone in this world, so don't worry--you'll find yours, or maybe they'll find you. It never happens when you want it too, though. Just be yourself and carry on. Love will be yours--I guarantee it.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! This was beautifully sad :(
The language usage is simply brilliant !

[Voice]

Very deep after all love is the oldest and most powerful emotion. This is a brilliant write and it shows how much this person truly means to you. Just a very beautiful piece!!!

Voice