Bella Swan

I wrote this after listening to a song that inspired me. This is from the point of view of Edward Cullen

I had given up all hope,

Of falling in love,

It seemed to avoid me,

I was a pigeon, not a dove.

 

My family loved me enough,

Maybe even more,

But I couldn't help thinking,

That my life was a chore.

 

There was something missing,

That last piece of the puzzle,

The key to my happiness,

Was in your hug and a sweet nuzzle.

 

I never thought that love would be like this,

It seemed that you appeared out of thin air,

No matter how you got here,

You here and about the rest, I don't care.

 

I was always so down,

I felt too tired to sleep,

I felt like there was no way out,

I was being pulled down, deep.

 

Now that you're with me,

I feel strong again,

You're not just my lover,

You're also my best friend.

 

I would do anything,

To be with you forever,

I just want to be near you,

I want us to be together.

 

Our love has changed me,

In ways that I couldn't have imagined,

How can a feeling do this?,

It was unfathomed.

 

I am smiling again,

I dance with every step under the sky blue,

Never forget,

That I love you.

Reviews

[Laura]

I love it!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

pretty cool stuff...like the line...i was pidgeon, not a dove...

[Samuel Dickens]

Love and infatuation seems to be a subject you know well. Just use a little caution and remember that while it can bring great joy, it can also deliver terrible pain.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Great work and what a beautiful flow.
I guess that it can even make a beautiful song!