Paul McCartney

This is a poem I wrote about my love, Paul McCartney.

I couldn't tell you,

Why I'm in love with you,

It's so hard to explain,

The way I feel,

But if I could put my love into words,

It might go like this:

 

Eyes of dark brown,

A mouth that never frowns,

A smile that lights me up,

Even when things are tough,

One touch and I'm alive,

You get me through the night,

One kiss and I can't breathe,

I hope you never leave,

Even if it did end,

I'd do it all over again,

Because it was beautiful.

Reviews

[Paul]

This is really good Gabby! Awesome job describing Paul McCartney!

[RaindropsRoses93]

Hey I read this in school! I thought it was great then and I still do now lol

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is great! and its not like every other fan fiction work, its really very different!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

FABULOUS! I love The beatles, John was my favorite, always in the weirded way out there man. But Paul was the most sucessful of the fab4. I really think this is great.

[J.Black]

Whoa, this is really refreshing!