I Didn't Know

You said you'd love me forever,

You said you couldn't live without me,

You said I was beautiful,

You said I was your only.

 

I said I didn't believe you,

I said you were lying,

I said you never loved me,

I said that and you started crying.

 

I said I didn't love you,

Oh, why couldn't I shut up?!,

I said all those things to you,

Why couldn't I lighten up?!

 

I didn't know you were true,

I didn't know you wanted me to be your wife,

I didn't know this when I screamed, "LIAR!",

I didn't know this until the night you ended your life.

 

Now I'll never be your wife,

Now I'll never see,

But, now I know,

That in Heaven, we will always be.

 

I didn't have the guts to say,

That when I pushed you away,

I wanted you to come closer to me.

 

Goodbye, my love,

Goodbye, my sweet,

Goodbye, my lover.

 

Don't be sad for now I see,

Just now that I will always love you.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

There are quite a few grammatical and spelling errors in this. For instance in the first line I think you think you meant "couldn't" instead of "couldn've"

I like how you use repetition here, though it does get a little heavy at times. I also like how the poems seems to be going in one direction, but then leads us to another one.

[RaindropsRoses93]

I don't know if I would be able to believe a guy either but it was really sweet