Typical teenagers

My first post. Just something I wrote recently.

Identify with storys we embrace

But on the throne is just one place

We're proud of our paper crowns

Until it rains, and they fall down

No one wants to be the same

Soon enough we'll break the frame

Your violet is my lilac

Hate on people that we never met

Pleading for ourselfs

Wearing black to join aswell

But we're so different

Aren't we?
Wanna be like you
so you wanna be like me

Author's Note

I'm german and I try to avoid as much grammar mistakes as i possibly can. Sooo If there's a mistake, just correct me!
Also my first 'poem' on here.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe Gerwoman, Got to be be honest it has potential like serious GOood stuff! :) tip 1 StorIES,as well, That's what I quickly saw good work Luisa :) keep trying and read a few poems here :) enjoy and good luck! :)

[Katie Alexander]

Almost no grammar problems. I love the message.